duniaguodupa的作文贴，基础差，求指导~^^

duniaguodupa

9月14日
Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?


Currently, since the society develops rapidly, people are more and more concerned about the education. And then it raises a wide spread discussion that whether it is easier for people to become educated now than in the past. From my points of view, becoming educated is much easier for people currently. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the pressure from works urges people to be assiduous to get educated. With the development of technology, the skills of working become much more crucial for the employees. Take the Google as the example, it is a high technological company, which means that the employees working in it must handle the latest technologies. Therefore, if we want to work in Google, we have to become educated well. All these prove that the pressure from the new and great job help us to get education.

Moreover, the advanced technology products, including the computers, the Internet and mobile devices, is the most useful tools for us to become educated we have ever used. Accordingly, by using these advanced tools, we can learn everything very conveniently and efficiently. When I was a high school student, I'd love to use the computer to do some extensive study, which can give me a better understanding of the subjects. Thanks to the computer, I finished high school with a excellent award and get the offer of my favorite university. Hence, it is apparent that the latest technology makes us easier to become educated than in the past.

Admittedly, some advanced inventions, such as the Television and computer games, affect some children to have no interest in study. However, the advantages from these inventions overweigh the disadvantages. For example, watching TV appropriately can have a good effect on them.

To conclude, nowadays, people are becoming much easier to be educated. Not only the pressure from development of technology but also the advanced inventions can help people to get education.

duniaguodupa

9月14日
Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?


Currently, since the society develops rapidly, people are more and more concerned about the education. And then it raises a wide spread discussion that whether it is easier for people to become educated now than in the past. From my points of view, becoming educated is much easier for people currently. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the pressure from works urges people to be assiduous to get educated. With the development of technology, the skills of working become much more crucial for the employees. Take the Google as the example, it is a high technological company, which means that the employees working in it must handle the latest technologies. Therefore, if we want to work in Google, we have to become educated well. All these prove that the pressure from the new and great job help us to get education.

Moreover, the advanced technology products, including the computers, the Internet and mobile devices, is the most useful tools for us to become educated we have ever used. Accordingly, by using these advanced tools, we can learn everything very conveniently and efficiently. When I was a high school student, I'd love to use the computer to do some extensive study, which can give me a better understanding of the subjects. Thanks to the computer, I finished high school with a excellent award and get the offer of my favorite university. Hence, it is apparent that the latest technology makes us easier to become educated than in the past.

Admittedly, some advanced inventions, such as the Television and computer games, affect some children to have no interest in study. However, the advantages from these inventions overweigh the disadvantages. For example, watching TV appropriately can have a good effect on them.

To conclude, nowadays, people are becoming much easier to be educated. Not only the pressure from development of technology but also the advanced inventions can help people to get education.

duniaguodupa

9月17日
Grades (marks) encourage students to learn？A\D


Currently, the rush of getting education has been gaining at an amazing rate, urging more and more parents to send their children to school to be better educated. And then, it raises a wide spread discussion that whether grades can encourage students to learn. From my points of view, I suppose that wanting to get high grades can enhance the learning of students.

It is undeniable that getting high marks is not the goal of the students. The true reason why students should study is that learning can adjust students to be useful and suitable to our society. However, grade is an efficient and useful tool to encourage students pay more attention on learning.

To begin with, in order to get higher grades, students will spend enough times on study, ensuring that students can learn the knowledge better. As a matter of fact, learning is a job that requires spending lots of time. Take my friends Joe and Tom as examples, they were my classmates in the middle school. Joe was a hard-working student who always lost himself in study in a long time, while Tom was not as assiduous as Joe. It is apparent that Joe got grades higher than Tom. What's more, Joe absorbed the knowledge much deeper than Tom and now he still could use the knowledge learned at that time.

Moreover, grades are inviting enough to attract students to participate the seminar and accomplish their tasks better, which are very significant for students to learn knowledge. In the seminar, students can discuss their own opinions about the knowledge and learn from each other, enhancing the understanding of knowledge efficiently. Additionally, the tasks are the most important method for students to implement their knowledge in practice. There is no better illustration than the example of my own experience in college. When I was a first year student, I cannot get considerable marks. Fortunately, a friend encouraged me to participate in the project that helps the store near the campus to attract customers. I accepted his advice because I majored in marketing and this project can help me to get higher score in marketing. After that, I got a high grade in marketing, but I also learned the knowledge of marketing much better.

In conclusion, grades are very useful to promote students' learning. Spending more time and participating in more seminars and tasks are the great way to get high grades, furthermore, they can enhance students' understanding of knowledge.

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蓝的是我也不知道的地方~红的是我认为有问题的地方

Currently,the rush of getting education has been gaining at an amazing rate（才疏学浅哈~不确定可不可以和之前的rush连着用~）,urging more and more parents to send their children to school to be bettereducated. And then, it raises a wide spread discussion that whether grades canencourage students to learn. From my points of view, I suppose that wanting to get (感觉the desire to get…更好) highgrades can enhance the learning of students.

It is undeniable that getting high marks is notthe goal of the students. The true reason why students should study is thatlearning can adjust（我不知道可不可以这样表示哈~就是表示一下自己的不肯定，告诉你一声~） students to be useful and suitable to our society.However, grade is an efficient and useful tool to encourage students to paymore attention on learning.

To begin with, in order to get higher grades,students will spend enough times onstudy, ensuring that students(they) can learn the knowledge better. As a matter offact, learning is a job that requires spending lotsof time. Take my friends Joe and Tom as examples, they were my classmates inthe middle school. Joe was a hard-working student who always lost himself instudy in(for) along time, while Tom was not as assiduous as Joe. It is apparent that Joe gotgrades higher than Tom. What's more, Joe absorbed the knowledge much deeperthan Tom and now he(感觉换成人名吧，指代不是很清晰) stillcould use the knowledge learned at that time.

Moreover, grades are inviting enough（能告诉我什么意思吗） to attract students to participate the seminarand accomplish their tasks better, which are very significant for students tolearn knowledge. In the seminar, students can discuss their own opinions aboutthe knowledge and learn from each other, enhancing（我真的不知道能不能这样用哈~貌似我英语真的不过关…） the understanding of knowledge efficiently. Additionally, the tasksare the most important method for students to implement their knowledge inpractice. There is no better illustration than the example of my own experiencein college. When I was a firstyear student(a freshman), I cannotget considerable marks. Fortunately, a friend encouraged me to participate inthe project that helps the store near the campus to attract customers. Iaccepted his advice because I majored in marketing andthis project can help me to get higher score in marketing.After that, I got a high grade in marketing(这个词太重复了吧the subject, it之类的替换一下吧), but(为什么转折呢~what’s more更恰当吧) I alsolearned the knowledge of marketingmuch better.

In conclusion, grades are very useful to promotestudents' learning. Spending more time and participating in more seminars andtasks are the great way to get high grades, furthermore, they can enhancestudents' understanding of knowledge.

貌似我果然英语很弱~看LZ的作文很多东西都不确定~似是而非~
很多用法我没有见过，也不知道是否合适，见谅吧
文章表达的感觉不是很通畅~几个词总是重复呀重复~多积累吧，所有人都有这个问题
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