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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

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Students moving into a new community and attending a new school can face a lot of problems. Their biggest worry is usually fitting in. The school counselor, the school’s administration and the students’ teachers can all help the students come through this experience successfully. They can engage other students to become involved with the new students, too.

New students in a school need to feel like part of the school community as quickly as possible. A school administrator should begin by giving students a complete orientation to their new school. They should take them on a tour of the school and show them the classrooms, gym, computer lab, band room, and cafeteria. They should tell them about the history of the school, its academic achievements, and its athletic and debating teams. The administrator can talk to the students about what’s expected of them in the classroom and what rules the school has.

The school counselor should talk to the students about what they are most interested in studying. If these are older students, the counselor can ask them about career interests. If these are younger students, the counselor can ask them about their favorite subjects at their old school. The counselor can tell the students about all the extracurricular activities there are at the school. For example, the school might offer things like sports, art, music, and working on a school newspaper.

The teachers have the most important job when it comes to new students. It is up to them to help the students meet other students in class. They can also help them learn how classes are conducted in their new school. They can encourage other students to make friends with new people and help them learn the system. Since they are with the students the most, they can keep an eye on them and make sure they are adapting well.

Both the adults and the other students need help new students feel a part of their new school. It is not easy, but it pays off with happier, more successful students in the end.

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Students moving into a new school can face a lot of problems. Their biggest worry is usually how to fit in. The counselor, the administrator and teachers can all help them overcome the difficulties successfully. They can also engage other students to help the new students too.

New students in a school need to feel like part of the school community as quickly as possible. A school administrator should begin by giving those students a complete orientation to their new school. The orientation program should include a tour of the school which will show new students the classrooms, gym, computer lab, band room, cafeteria, etc. They should tell them about the history of the school, the academic achievements, the sports teams and culture societies. An introduction of the basic rules and regulations is also needed.

The school counselor should talk with the students about their study. For older students, focus of the talk may be on career planning while if it’s a freshman, the counselor may ask about their favorite subjects. He can also encourage students to participate extracurricular activities at the school, for example, joining a sports team or working for the school’s newspaper.

The teachers play the most important role in helping new students. It is their job to help the students meet other students in class. They can also help them learn how classes are conducted in their new school. They should encourage other students to make friends with new people and help them. Since teachers stay with students most often, they are in the best position to watch new students and make sure they are adapting well.

It is the job of virtually everybody of the school to help new students.

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