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naej3694

看看。。不知道怎么加强啊

naej3694

在哪里站队啊？我也有作文求改。。看见题目总是不知道写什么，思路没打开、、、所以。。。。感觉自己的没有例子也没思路、。。。10月20号最后一站了。。。呜呜。求建议啊。。。有很多地方感觉思路要加强。但是不知道是不是，内容是不是要加。。最后写得好乱啊

naej3694

Topic：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It's more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.

Many,  maintain the viewpoint that they are more fond of having a job where they work only three days a week for long hours than having a job where they work five days a week for shorter hours, claim that the former make out more free time than the later. Personally speaking, I can not absolutely oppose this point of view, however, a job that people work five days a week for shorter hours makes more appealing to me considering the healthy lifestyle and the higher working efficiency.
Initially, one reason which encourages me to hold this opinion is that working less hours a day is healthier for me. On my position, I prefer to make a balance between work and life. That means suitable working and all sorts of exercise such as running, playing Pingpong  construct my daily life. On the contrary, some people would like to take two days out for relaxing journey. I believe  two days' journey can not relax myself absolutely.Rather than  two days' journey, I will choose to do basic exercise everyday joyfully. Consequently, the hours taked out each day is make up for enjoying exercise.
To back up my point, it could be relevant to include another cause that working more days a week can improve my working efficiency. Staying working five days a week can benefit to keep my regular habit on working. Manage to do the work everyday a little means more time to think about my work schedule, stupid mistakes before it is handed out to the employee. Even if there is an emergency to remanage my work, fives days is more efficient and convinient to use than three days.
Judging from all the evidence offered above, we can arrive at this conclusion that I disagree the statement having a job where you work only three days a week for long hours is  happier to the moon than that working five days a week for shorter hours for achieving higher working efficiency and healthier living style.



自己都不知道写什么内容可以充实。总是这样的。。也没例子、。然后各种愁啊。。求批改。。然后老手机只有QQ，所以发邮箱406269159(AT) QQ.C0M

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