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[作文互改] 科技类issue 总觉得很难写出新意 求拍!!

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发表于 2012-8-11 22:22:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
33. As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.



Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.





There is no time in history where the world has changed more dramatically due to the involvement of the human being and our intelligence. One of the predominant sounds that as we acquire more knowledge, the world around us has become more comprehensible, is, however somewhat untenable to me considering the infinite desire of human and numerous problems come along with the development of technology and society.



While it may be true that the human being today is omniscient, but human's infinite desire never stops swelling. For example, although today we have fathomed that numerous horrible disease like hemophilia, results from gene, we never stop researching as we now want to find a cure for it, which could arouse a series questions. Can we cure the infant before giving birth? Can we adjust the gene of sperms or eggs to creat a healthy new baby for those who are suffering genetic diseases, instead of suggesting them not to have a baby? Indeed, as we acquire more humanity knowledge, we realize that it is unfair and cruel to deprive others right to be a parent; as we acquire more scientific knowledge, we realize that maybe we could modulate the genes of the parents. And all those realizations also have triggered further researches, and thus make things more complex and mysterious. Likewise, since we have conquered the bottom of the Pacific, our "Curiostiy" even stepped in Mars recently. USA NASA opened a new door to a new planet for us explore, on which everything is brand-new and mysterious. So, obviously our desire never dies with any significant accomplishment or achievement. As old philosopher pointed, there is no best only better.



Considering the statement from another side, as we acquire more and accomplish more, numerous problems also germinate. Internet, for instance, has become a serious issue among developed countries like the online bank accounts' safety. We created a digital world, which surely benifits us significantly, however, the safety problem has become so widespread that in some universities, Internet Safety has become a major field for students. Also, the environment problem that grows with the techonology, was not predictable when we started the industrial revolution. In fact, the nature and complexity of a certain issue may take a really long time to be exposed and examined. Hence, as time goes by, no matter how much knowledge we acquire, we will be confronting new issues that we do not know yet.



In sum, countless puzzles have been solved by us since we have been exploring the word and learning from it for a long time. Indeed, knowledge is power. Nevertheless, after a scrupulous consideration, we can conclude that by no mean can these knowledges make things more comprehensible than complex and mysterious.


已经自己改了错别字了。。 457字,我觉得我写不出太长的了。。。半小时内。。

下面是提纲

1.随着人类掌握的越来越多,人类的欲望也在无止尽的膨胀着。没有最好只有更好。---征服疾病
2.随着发展,我们越来越多的发现了更多的问题,并且这些问题是需要长时间的检验和判断,不一定可以预测到。--环境资源问题


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-11 22:34:22 | 只看该作者
求指教,哪怕只是几个小的点都可以。。。  科技类文章真的很难发散的感觉 永远是那么几个观点。。。。。。。。。哎
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-12 11:23:42 | 只看该作者
顶  一  下  。
地板
发表于 2012-8-12 11:28:06 | 只看该作者
这个题目你不能放在一起谈,否则很难扯清楚最好分开谈,具体到某些领域去谈,比如消毒这个领域,比如牛顿经典物理力学。然后指出其他某些领域却不是这样,比如对宇宙的认识,。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-12 11:46:40 | 只看该作者
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这个题目你不能放在一起谈,否则很难扯清楚最好分开谈,具体到某些领域去谈,比如消毒这个领域,比如牛顿经典物理力学。然后指出其他某些领域却不是这样,比如对宇宙的认识,。


版主  还是有点不懂,什么叫不能放在一起谈啊。。。?不是每个观点一到两个例子吗?
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发表于 2012-8-12 11:50:05 | 只看该作者
我的意思不同时我们对科学即越来越了解也同时越来越不清晰
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-12 11:53:13 | 只看该作者
哦 。。好的。谢谢
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