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[作文互改] issue 19 (眼前利益与长久之计) 邀拍

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发表于 2012-8-9 11:27:34 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
19 Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.


观点:未来和眼前要兼顾
+)眼前问题具有紧迫性,要给以足够关注。
-)考虑未来的问题相当于做各方面的战略计划,十分重要。使资源有效利用安排。发展方向明确。民众可以对政府有效监督,提高凝聚力。
-)没有这种战略计划,现在的问题也解决不好。同时,很多未来问题很快会变成当前的棘手问题。比如资源和环境。

It is reasonable to focus on solving the immediate problems of today, but abandoning solving the future problems is far from wise. That is, we never doubt the rightness to view the current affairs important, but we doubt whether the immediate problems can be solved without considering anticipated issue. And we are also suspicious such a choice in the issue is serious to the mass in a country.



First of all, we have to admit that taking the immediate problems is crucial. Nowadays, all sorts of catastrophes, including earthquakes, floods, volcanoes, and Haiphong, are happening nearly everyday around the world. For every government, without taking these emergencies serious or taking related policies to solve them, the survival of the government is a problem, let alone the development. Take the current Europe
as another example. Because almost all the countries there are surviving in the economic recession, their central policies are surely about recovering nation's economic situation and strengthen mass' confidence. That is to say, based on the urgency of current affairs, it's necessary and beneficial to focus on the problems of today.


However, we cannot separate the current affairs and the future consideration apart, viewing them as incompatible staffs. Quite the opposite, solving the anticipated problems of future is not only important, but also shares a close relationship with today problems' solving.



On the one hand, tackling with the future problems is significant. Tackling with the future problem means to make future strategies and plan in all fields, including economic, military, culture, resources, and diplomacy. For one thing, such a strategy can set a clear goal for all the members of the government. In that way, the officers get an idea about what to do, and where to go. All the energies and resources can be allocated reasonably. For another thing, knowing the government's future plan, the mass are acquired of what the government will do, and what can be taken to them, benefit or loss. Even, the people could supervise the government's manners and offer comments effectively. Therefore, the government's efficacy and causative power will be lifted, as a result of future plans.



On the other hand, ignoring the future problems, the immediate problems cannot be settled well because things are connected in the world. For example, put the future environments problems aside, Dalian government agreed the set up of Fujia chemical company, which will release much toxic gas. Yet, because the Dalian
habitants paraded to reject it, the company had to be moved. Much extra fund has to be devoted. So, as you can see it, issues of today have something to do with the future problems.
Besides, some future problems, without enough attention, will become immediate problems. If the government don't consider protecting the environment for future, the mass' living quality and the reputation of the country or city will be decreased generally. Then the government will have to devote much more fund on the environment recovering. For another problem, energy crisis has been a huge issue for many countries now, because few have attended the energy limit and new energy development.



Now, we know that government should focus on solving both the immediate problems of today and the anticipated problems of the future. After all, the two elements are related with each other closely.

表达还依然很罗嗦吗···
结尾总是很糟烂,有什么好办法呢?
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沙发
发表于 2012-8-9 13:35:34 | 只看该作者
however 那段可以和on one hand 那段合并, on the other hand可以改成further more. 这样结构就更清晰合理了。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-9 15:36:14 | 只看该作者
嗯,好,以后类似的多加注意
地板
发表于 2012-8-10 22:04:27 | 只看该作者
我觉得这个题目的结尾你可以这么说,不管长远利益是什么,有一点是明确的,它们必须是对社会和民众真正有利的
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-10 23:07:09 | 只看该作者
嗯,跳出问题本身追求根本的东西,好思路
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