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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lose of old friends

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In present-day society, friendships are very important to our life. Not only we can share our happiness or pain with our friends, but our

friends can give us opinions or support us to survive tough time we face in our life. Someone has negative attitude about moving to a new

place. They think the movement will stop the friendship. From my point of view, I strongly agree that it is good for people to move to a new

city especially for young people for the following reasons.

First and foremost,  moving to a new place means that we will have new opportunities to meet new friends. For example, many college

students are eager to go abroad to further their education after college . when these students move to their dream countries, they have to

face many different problems. The most important things for them are to get used to the new places and get to collect information about

how to rent a room, how to open a bank account and where is the most convenient supermarket to do grocery shopping. It is easy way to

obtain these useful information from new friends they just know from the new places.  

Secondly, as the development of advanced science and technology, communicating with anyone at anywhere becomes much more easier in

the modern society. No matter where we live, we can immediately take up our mobile phone to call our friends who may live in around the

world. For example, my best friend is right now living in Germany, we have not seen each other for more than five years. We almost talk with

each other via Skype or write emails twice a week. Our friendship does not stop due to the distance. What's more, thanks to the advanced

technology, we feel like we are closed as we used when she was in my city. With frequent communicating, I think there is definitely no one

can argue that he or she will lose old friends because of moving to a new place.

Finally, moving to a new place will give us chances to realise how strong we are. It is true that we may feel lonely when starting a new life in

a total new environment. However, as far as I am concerned, separated with old friends is not a bad thing to some degree. Because we will be

promoted to learn some new social skills, like how to find a meet-up group to get know new friends. After that, our ability of dealing with

environment will be improved. From my perspective, out old friends will also be glad to see such changes we make.

In conclusion, I have no doubt to say that keeping a friendship does not have much to do with the distance. I believe nothing would lose by

moving to a new place and some good results may gain from that, such as making new friends, obtaining plentiful opportunities to know

ourselves more and learning new social skills.

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In present-day society, friendship is very important to everyone. Not only we can share our happiness or sadness with our friends, but can get supports from them to help us go through tough situations that we have to face in our entire life. Someone has negative attitude about moving to a new city or a new country. They think the movement will stop old friendship and will lose old friends. But, from my point of view, I am strongly against those who have negative thinking about moving to a new place. I believe that it is good for people who move to a new city or a new country.

First and foremost, moving to a new place means that we will have new opportunities to meet new friends. For example, many college students are eager to go abroad to purse higher degree. When these students move to their dream countries, they have to face a lot of different problems. We have to get used of new place, get information of how to rent a new apartment, how to open a bank checking account or where is the most convenient supermarket. It is an easy way to obtain this useful information and get help from new friends we just make in the new city or the new country.

Secondly, as the development of advanced science and technology, communicating with anyone at anywhere becomes much more easier in all over the world. No matter where we live, we can immediately take up our mobile phone to call friends who may live over 6,000 miles away in the world. A great example, my best friend is living in Germany and I have not seen her for more than five years. We usually talk with each other via skype or write emails twice a week. Our friendship does not stop due to the long distance or I don’t lose her because she moved to a new country. What is more, thanks to the advance technology, we feel like we are next to each other as we were in the college.

Finally, moving to a new place will give us chances to realize how strong we are. It is true that we may feel lonely when starting a new life in a total new environment. However, as far as I am concerned, separated with old friends is not too bad. We will be promoted to learn how to be independent and learn new social skills, like how to make an introduction in front of strangers.  After that, our ability of dealing with new place will be improved. From my perspective, our old friends will also be glad to see such changes we make.

In conclusion, I have no doubt to say that sincere friendship does not change because of moving to a new place. I believe nothing would lose and some good results may gain from moving to a new place, such as making new friends, obtaining plenty of opportunities to understand ourselves more and learning new social skills.

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In present-day society friendshipis very important to everyone. (we look to a friend for support during tough situations that we encounter each day). Most people have Someone hasnegative attitude towards relocating to moving to a new city or a new country. They are afraid to lose friendshipsthat they have established over the years

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In present-day society friendship is very important to everyone. We look to a friend for support during tough situations that we encounter each day. Most people have negative attitude towards relocating to a new city or a new country. They are afraid to lose friendships that they have established over the years. I believe that moving to a new place is healthy for individual.

First and foremost moving to a new place means that you will have new opportunities to meet new friends. For example many college students are eager to purse their education abroad. When these students move to foreign countries, they have many chances to meet new friends. They are forced to assimilate to their new surroundings very quickly. Each day provides opportunities to interact with people to locate local supermarket, bank and restaurants. It is an easy way to obtain useful information from new friends.

Secondly, with the development of advanced science and technology, communicating with anyone at anywhere has become much easier globally. You can call your friend who may live over 6,000 miles away by using your mobile phone. I have not seen my best friend who is living in Germany for more than five years. We communicate with each other via skype or emails twice a week. Our friendship does not suffer even though we are miles apart. I don’t lose her because she moved to a new country. Thanks to the advance technology, we feel closer now than we were in college.

Finally, moving to a new place will give you chance to improve yourself. You may feel lonely initially when starting a new life in a new environment. You will learn how to be independent, learn new social skills and improve your public speaking. Adaptation to a new place will come quickly. Your old friends will be proud of your accomplishment.  

In conclusion I have no doubt that sincere friendship does not suffer by moving to a new place. I believe that by moving to a new place, you will make new friends, explore new opportunities and improve your social skills.

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Parents should help children to do their work or encourage children to do their work independently