8月战T记

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老大作文改好了，感觉进步好大

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先给你的，我的就来~

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Do you agree or disagree with the parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake.
As we all know, education is one of the main pillars of a prosperous society, and parents play crucial roles in it. Nowadays, there is a debate over whether parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake. Some people argue that preventing children make mistake and teaching them how to deal with the problems are more wise for parents. In contrast, I prefer the view that let children make mistake and learn from their own mistake are good for them. My view can be greatly substantiated by following discussions.
First of all, as a proverb says," failure is the mother of success." That is to say, no one can be succeed without making mistake. As a child grows up, he or she should make mistake and learns from it. The example is not far to seek. We all know that Edison is the famous inventor. But before he invented bulbs, he had failed thousands of times in the experiments. If Edison was taught by parents not make mistakes, and not analyzed the reason of mistake, he would never be able to find the right material for bulbs.
Secondly, I'm convinced that the experience children get from their own mistake is more useful than the experience of their parents. Although some people say that it will save much time if parents prevent children from making mistake and tell them how to deal with the problem directly. But if children learn experience from their failures, and then children will hardly make the same mistake again. Besides,parents' experience are not suitable for every situation their children meet with, even some advice which used to be correct is of no use at all. Living in a fast changing society, the generation gap is becoming larger and larger.
Finally, I regard independence as a key ingredient of children. As far as I'm concerned, leting children make mistake, and then learn from their mistake is the best way to develop their ability of independence. From my point of view, parents have the responsibility to instruct children's behavior, but not to prevent them from making mistakes.

PS.感觉details太少了。children，parents，let，mistake这些词都应该多用同义替换才更丰富。

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Do you agree or disagree with the parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake.


As we all know, education is one of the main pillars of a prosperous society, and parents play crucial roles in it. Nowadays, there is a debate over whether parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake. Some people argue that it is wise for parents to prevent children from making mistake. In my opinion, however, compared with teaching children how to deal with the problems, leting children make mistake and learn from their own mistake is better for them. My view can be greatly substantiated by following discussions.


First of all, as a proverb says," failure is the mother of success." That is to say, no one can be succeed without making mistake. As a child grows up, he or she should make mistake and learn from it. The example is not far to seek.（好句子！） We all know that Edison is the famous inventor. But before he invented bulbs, he had failed thousands of times in the experiments. If Edison was taught by parents not make mistakes, and not analyzed the reason of mistake, he would never be able to find the right material for bulbs.


Secondly, I'm convinced that the experience children get from their own mistake is more useful than the experience of their parents. Admittedly, some people say that it will save much time if parents prevent children from making mistake and tell them how to deal with the problem directly. But if children learn experience from their failures, and then children will hardly make the same mistake again. Besides, parents' experience is not suitable for every situation their children meet with. Living in a fast changing society, the generation gap is becoming larger and larger. It is possible that some advice which used to be correct is helpless now.


Finally, I regard independence as a key ingredient of children. As far as I'm concerned, letting children make mistake, and then learn from their own mistake is the best way to develop their ability of independence. Every child will become an adult one day, so he must learn to face the problems alone. How can a person make a living by himself without the ability of independence?



In sum, failure is the mother of success. Parents have the responsibility to instruct children's behavior, but not to prevent them from making mistakes. Letting their children make mistake, and letting them benefit from their own experience of the failure are always the right choices.
我又改了一下，比昨天的应该好点了，字数是挺多了的，但是主体段后两段都没有举具体的例子，这样的作文算合格吗？

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好啦

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ：
The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years.
(Family)

Have you ever asked advice from your grandparents or others who are older than you? Have you ever learned from the experience of them? Have you ever made mistake only because you didn't follow the suggestion of them? If you have never had such experience, you would never know the importance of advice from the grandparents.

It is true that the world has changed a lot, but there is still something that remain the same. Let's think about the books we usually read, such as The Bile, the Das Kapital written by Karl Marx, and the Analects written by the ancient Chinese philosoher. These books are all the crystallization of wisdom, and they are all last for a long time and still useful now. No matter how faster the world has changed, people need to get wise knowledge and advice from these books. If we can learn from these old books, why can't we learn from our grandparents?

Furthermore, as our grandparents have experienced lots of things, they are wise than us. When we are confused about how to make it through, they always give us right advice. Take myself for an example. I always visit my grandparents in weekends, enjoy dinner with them, and talk with them. During the communication with them, I can always get some useful advices. One of the advices I really appreciate is that my grandfather advise me to practice calligraphy with him. I accepted this advice, and I'm now good at handwriting. This advantage helped me win out in the job interview.

Above what I have discussed, it is true that living in a fast changing society, the generation gap is becoming larger and larger. It is possible that the advice from the grandparents is useful to their grandchildren. The world is changing, but the wisdom of human is never faded; the world is changing, but the love of the grandparents is never changing.

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今天的好难~

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进步神速，好好总结，再接再厉！！！今天下午出门去了，没有写作文……

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倒计时：13.。。。

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语法单词错误新鲜出炉！