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61#
发表于 2012-8-9 21:45:37 | 只看该作者
你的。。谢谢帮我找文章。。对了。你几时再G?

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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-9 22:37:11 | 只看该作者
你的。。谢谢帮我找文章。。对了。你几时再G?
-- by 会员 qiuhua01234567 (2012/8/9 21:45:37)


写了三篇,QT都有了明显的进步啦!!!O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
今天写的时候明显觉得自在了很多,老大说的句式问题也注意,时间也缩短了,额,于是错误就增加了,后面的确草草收尾了,还可以更完美,明天改一改~
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发表于 2012-8-10 14:05:49 | 只看该作者
最近都什么题目?- -
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
As the development of the economy, there is no deny that compared with our grandparents life, life today is easier and more comfortable. Thanks to the development of the technology, we can go someplace more easier, do something we want to do but cann’t do several years ago, and enjoy ourselves.It is universally acknowledge that our life is becoming more and more easier and comfortable. There are some asspects to account for it.

The main aspect why we become easier is transport. By development of the technology, more and more ways we can choose to go outside. However, couple of years ago, even we are in hurry, there is no cars and planes we can use. A good case in point is my grandfather. In their daily life, only rich man can use car, which is very old type and the speed of car is very slow.They had to walk few hours to reach their destination. However, today, we only need few hours.

Computer is another new thing can account for it. With only a click, everything we want to is on the screen. Whereever the information is, and whenever the information is, you need is only a click. There is no doubt that computer make our life more comfortable. If you don’t want to go shopping, to go outside to buy ticket, and to talk thing to somebody on yourself , you just need to connect to the internet. Using a computer, everthing can been done.

On the other hand , we cannot deny that these development also bring some bad effective to us. More and more people are considering that environment. A partical example for this is the climate change. We can now feel the climate more and more warm. Since the environment. becoming worse gradullay, Even some people advocate that we should go back the time we didn’t use any high-technology.

However, we can not ignore these high-technology indeed bring some benefits in our dailylife. As far as i am concerned, on one hand , the high-techonoly should serve our daily-life, making our life more comfortable and eaiser. Because only the development of technology can make our life more and more beautiful. On the other hand, we should do our utmost to protect our environment. Cause we cannot emphasize the importance of the earth.
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发表于 2012-8-10 16:27:25 | 只看该作者
Do you agree or disagree with the parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake.


As we all know, education is one of the main pillars of a prosperous society, and parents play crucial roles in it. Nowadays, there is a debate over whether parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake. Some people argue that it is wise for parents to prevent children from making mistake. In my opinion, however, compared with teaching children how to deal with the problems, leting children make mistake and learn from their own mistake is better for them. My view can be greatly substantiated by following discussions.


First of all, as a proverb says," failure is the mother of success." That is to say, no one can be succeed without making mistake. As a child grows up, he or she should make mistake and learn from it. The example is not far to seek.(好句子!) We all know that Edison is the famous inventor. But before he invented bulbs, he had failed thousands of times in the experiments. If Edison was taught by parents not make mistakes, and not analyzed the reason of mistake, he would never be able to find the right material for bulbs.


Secondly, I'm convinced that the experience children get from their own mistake is more useful than the experience of their parents. Admittedly, some people say that it will save much time if parents prevent children from making mistake and tell them how to deal with the problem directly. But if children learn experience from their failures, and then children will hardly make the same mistake again. Besides, parents' experience is not suitable for every situation their children meet with. Living in a fast changing society, the generation gap is becoming larger and larger. It is possible that some advice which used to be correct is helpless now.


Finally, I regard independence as a key ingredient of children. As far as I'm concerned, letting children make mistake, and then learn from their own mistake is the best way to develop their ability of independence. Every child will become an adult one day, so he must learn to face the problems alone. How can a person make a living by himself without the ability of independence?



In sum, failure is the mother of success. Parents have the responsibility to instruct children's behavior, but not to prevent them from making mistakes. Letting their children make mistake, and letting them benefit from their own experience of the failure are always the right choices.
我又改了一下,比昨天的应该好点了,字数是挺多了的,但是主体段后两段都没有举具体的例子,这样的作文算合格吗?
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额。。。我觉得要举例子,也没有说不举例子就不合格的说法啦。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-10 22:02:19 | 只看该作者
做了10套TPO了才觉悟,阅读就是在考两样东西:单词,长难句!没别的了
其他单项的顿悟也快快到来吧!!到来吧!!!来吧!!!吧~~~~
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发表于 2012-8-10 23:30:46 | 只看该作者
我来报个道....今天几乎完全荒废了!
昨晚分析完阅读2点多,然后失眠,一直到天亮才睡着....中午起来,接了两个中介的电话,心里各种焦虑,着急....
于是,一咬牙,把考试日期提前到9.8号了.....
下午毫无状态,TPO1听力错的那个悲壮,于是又听写了一篇老托,翻出阅读长难句和阅读心经看了看
晚上整理了下载的口语和写作资料,理理头绪.....
焦虑啊!阅读正确率低,听力差的要命,口语和写作才着手,要死了
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-11 08:01:26 | 只看该作者
我来报个道....今天几乎完全荒废了!
昨晚分析完阅读2点多,然后失眠,一直到天亮才睡着....中午起来,接了两个中介的电话,心里各种焦虑,着急....
于是,一咬牙,把考试日期提前到9.8号了.....
下午毫无状态,TPO1听力错的那个悲壮,于是又听写了一篇老托,翻出阅读长难句和阅读心经看了看
晚上整理了下载的口语和写作资料,理理头绪.....
焦虑啊!阅读正确率低,听力差的要命,口语和写作才着手,要死了
-- by 会员 招财小猫jj (2012/8/10 23:30:46)


不要急不要急,我之前也被中介搞的焦虑的不行,所以就不接他们的电话了,或者就关机了。
不可能一口气吃成个胖子的对吧,正视自己的问题,和处的位置,一点点努力就好了,质变总会发生的!!!
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发表于 2012-8-11 08:59:14 | 只看该作者
恩~ 我也开了个帖子,28天,冲一下!一起加油~
http://forum.chasedream.com/TOEFL_iBT/thread-746702-1-1.html#last
69#
发表于 2012-8-11 11:14:59 | 只看该作者
Have you ever seen that someone known the every detais of study.however, it is difficult for him to tell the whole concept of the things he learned. Have you ever seen the article that has every specific details but has no opinions. Have you ever talked to somebody who has no concernation. If  you have never had these experiences. You would never known how important for us to understand ideas and concepts.

At the beginning, understanding ideas and concepts will imporve our communciation skill. We cannot emphasize the importance of communciation skill in our daily life too much. Good communciator can put forward his ideal easily and work cooperatively with others. what’s more, there are will fewever misunderstands. A good case for this point is myself. One day i talk to my friends my study. I complain how stress to work hard. However, After i complain something, my friend still don’t know what i want to say. He even don’t understand the concept of my ideal.

What’s more, It is universally acknowledged that concernation on the ideals and concepts will improve the effency of work and study.Compared to the facts, ideas and concepts put all the things into one word or few stences, making us understand the thing as soon as possible. A particulary example is my friends. He always get good grade in his study. I was wondering why his so effency, because everytime I saw him, he was always playing with others. So i asked him what is the secret of study. He said”nothing, just concernate on the main concepts, all the thing is in it.”

However, we cannot ignore the benefits of the facts. First, facts give the evidence to support the ideas. By giving the facts, we can make us more believeable. Also, facts give some additional information to us. With only ideas, we can’t toally understand what the others want to say or write.

In a word, although facts has some advantages, it is inferior to understand the concepts. Putting forward the concepts and making others understand are the crucial things.On the other hand, on no account give some facts. It will also make us more attractive and more convincing.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-11 11:49:14 | 只看该作者
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