920战T必胜！

qiuhua01234567

People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Have you ever heard somebody plays too late and goes bed too late,having bad effects on work. Have you ever play too excited to forget something and finally bring some bad effects. Have you ever known some family where people only know how to play, as a result, they only just live in the pool area. If you have never had such experience, you would never known the importance of doing the things people should do
At the beginning, there is no denying that people should make their own lives. As we all known, The more you work, The more money you will earned. In contrast, just know play and do nothing will make your life a mess. A good case in this point is one of my friends. He is very clever, but he doesn’t work hard. On the other hand, my other firend ,though, not smart than my former friend, work very hard. Finally, at the end of the semester, by working hard, my latter firend get good grade. However, my former friend is not very good.
The other aspect i think is that play too much will waste our times. There is no doubt that time is very valuable, Nothing can compare to the time.On no account can we ignore the value of time. However, by playing too much, we forget the importance of time. To express clearly, i will use myself as example. On day , i went out with my friend and I planed go back at 5:00 p.m. Unfortunately, we played so exicted that i even forgot the time. As result, when i went back home, i found it alreday 10:00 P.M. You know, i had go to school the next day and i had lots of  uncompleted homework.
On the other hand, it doesn’t mean that playing has no benefits.Firstly, playing can releive me from hard work. It can distracts me from difficultites at works, and it puts me in a good mood, helping me keep health and energetic when i return to work. Also, playing can improve our communication skill,which benefits us in the furture and it also can maintain harmonious environment. But, the benefits of do things we should do exceeds the advantage of just know how to play. We cannot emphasize the meaning of doing the things we should do too much. At the same time, we should relax and enjoy ourselves.

qiuhua01234567

第一行是题目，你的建议很好。谢谢，收益了。待会批作文去。

qiuhua01234567

帮你把你作文上传了啊。。之前的都在，今天也在。因为CD上格式。。。你懂的。。。DOC里看的比较清楚嘛。

TS28

8.8
【单词】list5部分
【听力】改半套，做一套
【阅读】一套
——听读都错惨了T T
【写作】改一篇，写一篇

专注当下，踏实走好每一步。=^o<=

TS28

8.9
【口语】1,2.tpo10.完成
本周要让阅读，听力飞跃！！！
【作文】改+写
今天的比较轻松~
【阅读】一套
*定位是个问题，做题要专心，专心分析，不行的话就读全段，别眼睛瞎扫都没往心里去。
*单词也是问题，一篇竟然可以错两个！背吧背吧，没别的！
【听力】复听分析一套
【单词】list5

qiuhua01234567

你今天作文修改的。都帮你归档了。到最后一起拿出来看看总结下哪些出问题比较多的。

招财小猫jj

亲，我也在你这里发进度吧~ 互相督促一下~ 前几天懒散的复习，一点儿效率都没有......
8.9
上午完成的 TPO 1 一篇阅读，计时做，翻译，分析 （我是龟速，足足2个半小时才弄完....）无老师list 1 看了一半
下午 老托福听写练习 3h （我的听力真心差，哎）； 无老师list 1 过完；
晚上 TPO 1 阅读做完，分析，总结单词 （希望能提高效率）；摸索一下写作的方法
PS：我水平很不好，希望两位多多指正~

qiuhua01234567

今天不爽死了。。超时+没素材写。先贴上。拜托你啦。T
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
我用惯have了，表怪我- -
Have you ever seen that when some people would rather walk to work than by car. Have you ever known that according to the report, the use of car is declining. Have you ever known when you are driving on the heavy traffic, how bad your mood is. If you have never had this experience, you would not believe that in 20 years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
The main reason to explan this is relax. Comapred to driving, walking can make you appreciate the beauty in your life. There are no deny that watching the beautiful trees and flowers beside the street can distract us from difficultites at work, and put us in good mood, helping us keep health and energetic when we face to the work. A especial example for this is myself. By walking to school, I feel excited and more powerful. However, driving is so boring on the way to the school.
The other aspect i think may account for this that pollution. It is universally acknowledge that driving has bad effect on the environment. The more frequent you drive, the more bad effect you will make. As the pollution is becoming the problem in our daily life. More and more people will choose walk to replace the driving. On no account can we ignore the place we live.
However, there are no doubt that driving bring us some benefit indeed. First, when we want to travel, or save time. Driving is a good choice. Also, it is very convenient to travel when we are in hurry. Obivously, the benefit of walking exceeds the advantage of driving. Given the explains i give, The reason why there will be fewer cars in use is clear.

qiuhua01234567

亲，我也在你这里发进度吧~ 互相督促一下~ 前几天懒散的复习，一点儿效率都没有......
8.9
上午完成的 TPO 1 一篇阅读，计时做，翻译，分析 （我是龟速，足足2个半小时才弄完....）无老师list 1 看了一半
下午 老托福听写练习 3h （我的听力真心差，哎）； 无老师list 1 过完；
晚上 TPO 1 阅读做完，分析，总结单词 （希望能提高效率）；摸索一下写作的方法
PS：我水平很不好，希望两位多多指正~

-- by 会员 招财小猫jj (2012/8/9 13:28:58)

你可以开个帖子。我的链接也欢迎来。可以一起互相批改，一起努力，相互鼓励。

TS28

亲，我也在你这里发进度吧~ 互相督促一下~ 前几天懒散的复习，一点儿效率都没有......
8.9
上午完成的 TPO 1 一篇阅读，计时做，翻译，分析 （我是龟速，足足2个半小时才弄完....）无老师list 1 看了一半
下午 老托福听写练习 3h （我的听力真心差，哎）； 无老师list 1 过完；
晚上 TPO 1 阅读做完，分析，总结单词 （希望能提高效率）；摸索一下写作的方法
PS：我水平很不好，希望两位多多指正~

-- by 会员 招财小猫jj (2012/8/9 13:28:58)

你跟帖发帖都行，相互监督，能好好学就行~