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写作小分队第三期已谢幕,alex谢谢大家的支持与厚爱

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发表于 2012-8-24 21:34:31 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2012-8-24 22:47:23 | 只看该作者
HZHJ得占8/24独立。5555。。来晚了,没被分到组,有谁愿意私下和我互批的哈。。Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Do you A/D



As the modern society develops, there is a debate over whether movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.Different people hold different opinions on this topic because their distinct backgrounds. Some people agree that the movie and TV have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.In contrast, I prefer to disagree on this view. Myself view can be greatly substantiated by following discussions.



First, there is no doubt that watching movie and TV can make the people very comfortable. Especially for the young people who have the big pressure every day on their work or study. Watching movie and TV enable their to fell relaxed. Like myself, when I'm tried on my body and feel very limp on my brain, I always choose to watch some movies and TV programs which I'm interested in. This recreation will let me feel very comfortable and happy. It will very useful for my coming work or study under stain.



Second, there is no one but longs to make a good relationship with their friends and families. To watch movie and TV with them is a great pleasure of course. Because we can chat with each other on some mutual interested topics or joke with them in this happy time.Like a recent important event about Olympic games, we gathered together and watched TV for different Olympic sports every evening at that period time. I had lots of fun on this recreation with my friends and families.



Finally, on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. The more knowledge we learn, the more learned we become. I never think that watching movie and TV will give young people more negative effects than positive effects, because there are always two sides to everything. The key is choose the correct program of movie and TV which will beneficial to our young people. Such as political news, 'discovery channel ',even education programs and on forth. I'd l like to rent some English film DVDs or choose some English programs on TV Because of improving my TOEFL listening skills. This learning method,unlike reading books, is not replaceable. I enjoyed every minute of this method that watching English movie and TV.



From all the above I have discussed, I can safely draw the conclusion that in order to have a good life habit for young people, we should improve our social skills and learning skills on the right method, meanwhile, this method also can give us more fun and relax, therefore, watching movie and TV is this right method. So I totally disagree that watching movie and TV have more negative effects than positive effects for young people.
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发表于 2012-8-24 23:10:21 | 只看该作者
我的23号的独立还没有被改。。。
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发表于 2012-8-24 23:33:03 | 只看该作者
不知道现在交还来得及不~~实在是不好意思呢,因为新加入所以疏忽了呢,没有看清楚小组规则,贴了作业,但没回复,对不起了~下次不会出现了呢~

8.24 独立http://forum.chasedream.com/TOEFL_Writing/thread-755520-1-1.html
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发表于 2012-8-25 10:59:11 | 只看该作者
满怀期待打开昨天作文,想看看别人的点评,结果就一句话

“没有什么大问题~~ 加油哦~~"


真不知道是不是综合写作太简单呢?还是我没有可以提升的空间了呢?


感觉真是枉费我花费30分钟的时间给别人点评


写作小分队的运行质量如何保证呢?我看了之前有出一些警告之类的,但是明显没有任何杀伤力,因为换一个马甲上来太简单不过了。而且,写作是一个非常考验文字表达水平和鉴赏能力的,如果水平差很远,本来不错的文章也会被改的面目全非,让人无语。


这里我有一个提议,就是需要建立一个信用机制和评估机制,根据小分队,每个队员的写作水平,及给别人批改的表现还划分。如果说划分为初中高,三个等级的有难度的话。建议可以划分为入门级别及提高级别两种,信誉评价也是如此。然后队长在分组的时候,将在同一组别中经行划分,而不仅仅简单按照提交的先后顺序划分。


优点,
1.可以增加队员写作的积极性,主动性,对自身提高很有好处。
2.可以提高给别人改作文的积极性,当然这个才是重点,毕竟考试是给自己的,点评是给别人的。出于人性的角度考虑,合理的机制才是可以规避很多问题的好办法,如果只是寄希望于别人的自觉性,是不会长久的。而且对于别人的积极性没有起到基本的保护,而是打击。。。至少我是这样的感觉,不知道是我太脆弱,还是太理想。
3.第一次加入小分队的成为,都分在入门级,然后更加表现加以提升。在提高组的同学会以更高的标准要求自己。这样的运作才能达到小分队的真正目的,就是共同提高。


记住,无论是任何一种管理,都离不开激励机制。


缺点,也显见,就是会增加队长的工作。。。不过这些是可以通过协调管理人员改进的地方。


本人拙见,见笑了。

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