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托福作文可以像GMAT的issue那样写吗?(帮改改吧,谢谢大神了~)

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发表于 2012-7-6 17:15:09 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
就是托福的大作文有 agree or disagree 的,可以像GMAT作文那样写partly agree 吗?



Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?


Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.


Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.




In this social, it is sufficient to keep the honest and to tell the truth to others. In addition, it is necessary to the entire individual to perform honest and to act as a truthful person. However, there are some extra conditions, which telling the truth is not a good choose. In sum, I partly agree with the assumption that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
In the first place, it is significant to telling the truth to someone close and to keep the relationship stable. In the same token, people hate people who lie to them; what's more, the basement of any relationship in this universe is depended on trust. For example, the classmates may not truth one again, if he or she lies to the classmates or stolen something from the classmates.
In the second place, in some particular situation it is necessary to lie to someone you care. In the other hands, there may be some situation exist, which one must lay to his or her friends or someone close to he or she. For instance, some particular situations such as the true that a badly sickness person loss his or her child or the situation that a seriously injury mother loss her husband. Any of the situations above, it is necessary to someone to lie to his or her friend. In the other hands, in order to increase profit of a company, the manager may not tell the truth to the competitive in companys negotiation. What's more, it is logical to do that; so, in those situation not telling the truth is the most important consideration in the relationship between people.
In conclusion, it is indeed sufficient for every individual on this plant to perform honest. Besides, there may be some necessary lies. In the same word, it is not meaning that anyone must be telling the truth all the time. Finally, it is not logical to assume that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
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沙发
发表于 2012-7-7 22:54:34 | 只看该作者
回答下你的问题:
1. 托福作文可以像GMAT的issue那样写吗?
写法基本相似的。
但两者考察侧重点有一些不同,G偏重逻辑思考,T偏重语言表达。
G的话题跟很多和商业有关,T的比较杂啊,学习、生活、校园、社会等等。

2. 托福的大作文有 agree or disagree 的,可以像GMAT作文那样写partly agree 吗?
可以,看范文有,要言之成理。


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板凳
发表于 2012-7-23 19:21:02 | 只看该作者
托的作文一般没有partly agree的,要么agree,要么disagree,今天上课的时候老师才讲的~~
地板
发表于 2012-7-26 12:15:31 | 只看该作者
攒人品,说说我对楼主这篇文章的观点吧:
1、偶始终觉得ETS这个脑残非常喜欢举例子的文章,这通过我三次的托福分数可以说明。我第三次托福是在考过gmat之后写的,所以非常喜欢谈原因,谈影响。谈原因的时候,也非常喜欢用普罗大众来举例,就像楼主一样in some situation.但是啊,第三次作文只有25分,我第一次作文时候语句词汇没现在好还得了27,我记得就是举了几个表哥的例子什么的。 我觉得最好还是普罗大众之后编一个具体一点的生动一点的事例比较好啊!你cites两个applied cases,还不如一个episode引得起来注意力,况且前者更难想。
2、还有,我觉得楼主的vocabulary还要加强!

祝你顺利!顺便也为我攒个人品……求批改:

题目是能不能从朋友的类型来判断一个人

IT's undeniable that two persons who differ from each other, or more precisely, have supplementary personalities, are more likely to become friends. For example, in the popular TV series of <friends>, two closed girls, Monica and Rachel, have opposite personalities. The former on is aggressive and easy to irritate, while the latter one is almost a pushover. Such cases are abundant in our daily life. Admittedly, we cannot judge one person's all characteristics by looking into his friend. However, it's really superficial to conclude that people cannot know someone better by evaluating his friends because they share different features. As far as I'm concerned, to a great extent, your friend is a mirror of yourself.
Firstly, we can judge a person by looking into his friend's hobbies. People tend to conceal some of their characteristics because they just want to create a certain image to the public. For example, Professor Green is extremely strict and rarely smiles to us students during the class time. We all consider him as a conservative man, or a nerd. To my surprise, when I was having a chat with an easy-going professor after class, he told me that Green is the most athletic person among the friends group. They often played basketball together and Green always scored the highest for his team. He is the real VIP. Sometimes we can hardly see a person from an all-around perspective, because the roles we play in the society stretch the distances between us. However, friends is nearly the most closed groups accompanying you, and you are eager to do the things you're mostly willing to do when you get together. Common interest is the base of the establishment of friendship, and it is also the supporting evidence for us to judge a person from his friends.
Secondly, we can judge a person by evaluating his friend's personality. It's impossible that two friends are totally similar, but at least, they share the most fundamental qualities. Again let's look into the case of Monica and Rachel. Even though Monica is much more aggressive than Rachel, they are equally kind and warm-hearted. What's more, the differences between each other gradually fade as they spend more time maintaining the friendship. Monica learns how to consider other's feelings from Rachel, and Rachel learns the independent spirit from Monica. In a lot of novels, authors are fond of the story that an old man and a small kid have become closed friends. If the old man worships the naive and innocent qualities in the kid while the kid finds the old man quite interesting and humorous, the age gap is not a of problem.
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