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攒人品,说说我对楼主这篇文章的观点吧: 1、偶始终觉得ETS这个脑残非常喜欢举例子的文章,这通过我三次的托福分数可以说明。我第三次托福是在考过gmat之后写的,所以非常喜欢谈原因,谈影响。谈原因的时候,也非常喜欢用普罗大众来举例,就像楼主一样in some situation.但是啊,第三次作文只有25分,我第一次作文时候语句词汇没现在好还得了27,我记得就是举了几个表哥的例子什么的。 我觉得最好还是普罗大众之后编一个具体一点的生动一点的事例比较好啊!你cites两个applied cases,还不如一个episode引得起来注意力,况且前者更难想。 2、还有,我觉得楼主的vocabulary还要加强!
祝你顺利!顺便也为我攒个人品……求批改:
题目是能不能从朋友的类型来判断一个人
IT's undeniable that two persons who differ from each other, or more precisely, have supplementary personalities, are more likely to become friends. For example, in the popular TV series of <friends>, two closed girls, Monica and Rachel, have opposite personalities. The former on is aggressive and easy to irritate, while the latter one is almost a pushover. Such cases are abundant in our daily life. Admittedly, we cannot judge one person's all characteristics by looking into his friend. However, it's really superficial to conclude that people cannot know someone better by evaluating his friends because they share different features. As far as I'm concerned, to a great extent, your friend is a mirror of yourself. Firstly, we can judge a person by looking into his friend's hobbies. People tend to conceal some of their characteristics because they just want to create a certain image to the public. For example, Professor Green is extremely strict and rarely smiles to us students during the class time. We all consider him as a conservative man, or a nerd. To my surprise, when I was having a chat with an easy-going professor after class, he told me that Green is the most athletic person among the friends group. They often played basketball together and Green always scored the highest for his team. He is the real VIP. Sometimes we can hardly see a person from an all-around perspective, because the roles we play in the society stretch the distances between us. However, friends is nearly the most closed groups accompanying you, and you are eager to do the things you're mostly willing to do when you get together. Common interest is the base of the establishment of friendship, and it is also the supporting evidence for us to judge a person from his friends. Secondly, we can judge a person by evaluating his friend's personality. It's impossible that two friends are totally similar, but at least, they share the most fundamental qualities. Again let's look into the case of Monica and Rachel. Even though Monica is much more aggressive than Rachel, they are equally kind and warm-hearted. What's more, the differences between each other gradually fade as they spend more time maintaining the friendship. Monica learns how to consider other's feelings from Rachel, and Rachel learns the independent spirit from Monica. In a lot of novels, authors are fond of the story that an old man and a small kid have become closed friends. If the old man worships the naive and innocent qualities in the kid while the kid finds the old man quite interesting and humorous, the age gap is not a of problem. |
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