以下是引用stellate在2004-10-24 14:07:00的发言:kuikui要问什么? Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own. 上面黑色部分是主句,蓝色部分是定语从句,绿色部分是分词做定语。 分开来看: 主句:Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe also inspired many musicians 主语Bill Monrue, 前面的音乐家是主语同位语,also=too 副词:也 定从1:whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists. 非限定性定语从句,whose指代Bill Monroe's 作所有格代词。and连接三个并列主语repertory、views和vocal style。谓语influenced
分词定语:including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, 相当于省略了which的非限定性定从,逻辑主语是musicians(which). ---有不同意见,我认为是插入语。 定从2:whose music differed significantly from his own. 非限定性定语从句,whose指代musician's。主语misic 谓语differed from. 全句意思是:这个人(PM),他的作品、观点和风格影响过很多人(artists),他自己(的精神)也鼓舞了许多musicians,(这些musicians中)包括(音乐风格与他有很大区别的)EP和JG。-------我有不同意见,因为including前面有一个逗号,所以including引导的是插入语,whose引导定语从句。改为这些音乐家(包括EP和JG)的音乐与他自已的音乐有很大的不同。 whose修饰musicians,因为including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia是插入语,是独立的,对其他成分没有影响的.由两个逗号格开句子的主要成分 所以whose应跳过插入语趣修饰musicians |