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w1998229

Nowadays, our world economy is characterized by high speed growing. Citizen who work in the cities have a better stander of living than past. Since the economy course is so prevail in the university that there is a group people arguing that high school student should take a basic course on economy. From my standpoint, dabbling in the economy field may give high school students advantages on their study.

First of all, it goes without saying that economy is such a field that about many academic aspects of high school students. To be honest, there is no chance for students to do well on economy if they have not a strong math background. In the economy course, there also are knowledges about society and sampling methods and so forth. Therefore, learning well on economy not merely giving students knowledge on this field but promoting students' average performance on all the course. For instance, according to a research, students who take the economy course also do better on other course, which means they have better performances on other aspects. It is tenable to say taking economy course give advantages far beyond economy.

Secondly, advantages also goes to as well as students daily life. Economy, this subject itself, is to teach people how to use least time to get most profits. Extravagant phenomenon among high school students can be seen everywhere. It's the time to teach students how to manage their money. Economy course is capable to play this important role, during the study of which students can know how to use their money well. For example, since I had taken the economic course, I made a contrived blueprint of future life. Keeping money to invest for some profits and searching a balance between studying and working for money. My life became more meaningful after I acquire the knowledge about this field.

Last but not least, taking in this field to gain economy knowledge can satisfy our basic curiosity about social phenomenons among our daily life. Why there always is a gap between budget and spense? How to caulk the hiatus between the government policy and practical regulation? Such are questions that interested people most. As a student, we should  get more knowledges about many aspects. Taking a economy course a high school stage provide a strong substratum of being a erudite person in the future.

 In a word, economy course can provide high school students such more advantages that can't be scribed in short words. It is conducive to all of us.

w1998229

补充题目是6.26的rocking writing 题目？（一个帖子的）， 看到了以后就写了， Q 二七五八六五四八八，希望有同学交流谢谢！

Crystaljoy

八错嘛~~~~

Crystaljoy

6月26日100206 NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High school students should take a course on basic economics.
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Crystaljoy

这个帖子http://forum.chasedream.com/TOEFL_Writing/thread-661450-1-1.html

Crystaljoy

你就懒到家吧。。。一篇都不往论坛帖。
你那几篇都写的那么好，让小分队的小妹妹学习一下嘛。