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lunating

6月17日110115 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.


No matter in which country, university professors are, without any exception, regarded as the role of educator, not to mention doing research. However, whether the main role is to educate students or do reseatch is magnet for controversy.

Admittedly, the duty of a university professor is to impart knowledge and educate people, which is the tradition since the ancient times. Also, the purpose of students attending colleges or universities is to gain various kinds of knowledge and form an own set of knowledge hierarchy. In this situation, the professors play a crucial role. In engineering management major, for example, there are many specialized courses which only fewer people know them or even are expert in them. All the students need are the professors in their department. Obviously, the  professors are essential to university students.

However, the professors in the college or university indeed need to do several research to enhance their scientific research capability so as to meet the demand of society. After all, just like scientists, they are standing at the frontiers of science and technology. It's their responsibility to make contributions in order to return socienty. More importantly, university professors need these scientific research products to confer the academic titles. What's more, it is also having impact on basic pay levers. All these force professors to allocate more time doing research. Accordingly, the role of a university professor doing research can not be ignored.

Furthermore, as the old saying goes: you're never too late to learn. Therefore, it is entirely reasonable for professors to do research to consolidate themselves. So it is going as a scientist, a CEO, a foreign executive, or other competitive positions. After all, as the enconomic globalization and technology progress, the competition is even fierce every three seconds on earth. In order to keep their jobs scurity and stability, hard work is definitely inevitable. While as a teacher, no one can deny that the most essentially work is to consider how to teach the students to learn best on not only the textbook knowledge, but also the fine personality.

All in all, although there lies various excuses to insist that the main role of a university professor is to educate students， it is pointless to make a distinction between educating students and doing research. As long as the students could benefit them in terms of accumulating research experience from their tutors and learning the necessary knowledgy they need in future.

lunating

6月16日110319NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

In present-day society, the human race is progressing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound societal changes have come some sufferings, and the influence of movies and television is very prominent among them. Some people assert that movies and television are more negative to young people, while the adversaries strongly contend that they have more benefits instead. From my own perspective, their views have both merits and demerits.

Granted, there could be some positive effects movies and television may bring about. In the first place, just like the saying: read books do miles, we could get to know the local conditions and customs from movies and television by limited for the fund as an ordinary person. For instance, by watching Downton Abbey, a British-American television series, which is definitely popular currently, we can be familiar with the aspects of hierarchy between British upper nobles and their servants at that time. In the second place, the thinking mode of foreigners can be otbained which lead us to better understand each other.

However, the opponents firmly believe that movies and television, the product of the Industrial Revolution, also have adverse effect, and they are against it for a couple of sound reasons. Firstly,numerous studies prove the fact that there is a strong link between the increase of television watching and the decline of reading ability. Hence, a generation of unimaginative couch potatoes has been created. Secondly, TV distances people because they lack adequate face-to face communication. The loss of friends and decline of competitive ability are the most immediate impact. Thirdly, the unsuitable scenses, like violent and sexual, can even affect young's development in the future.

In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent, movies and television are benefit to people. However, they can also deeply influence on people's behavior. On balance, I am convinced that the influence of movies and television is various, whether which kind of influence on you depends on the way you treat them.

lunating

包子亲 and banban亲，原谅笨笨的luna还没改完你们的综合，作文扎堆，让我无比错乱，再给我一点点时间，我会一认真完成。

kchszy061ban

蓝色为意见或建议高亮为精彩绿色为总结红色为错误

The reading passage concentrates on the issue of employees prefer to work four days a week with 80 percent of their original pay. The professor in the lecture also deals with the same topic. However, the professor is skeptical about the ideas of the reading passage.

First, the author in the reading suggests that companies profits will be increased while the work weeks is（去掉？） cut down. The professor argues that shorten workweek increases comanies spend（cost）, this is because more new workers need to be added which requires more space and computer in this situation. Obviously, the professor disproves the author's opinion.

Futhermore, dispite（不知在这里用这个词是否恰当） the statement of the reading passage that 4-day workweek reduces unemplyment rates, the professor thinks that the companies will ask the employees working overtime and raise their expctations to employees.That is to say, the employees need to do the same amount of 5-day workweek which leads them unpleasant.

Finally, the professor asserts that shorten work weeks will result（cause） some risks while（这里用dispite倒是感觉挺好）the author states that it is better for employees to increase their life quality. The professor proves that 4-day workweek decreases job stability and lost（looses） the promotion chance easily compared with 5-day work week employees.

整体很好，大意清晰，小部分加上去会更好的额。Luna进步好快，我要跟上

zombiee

6月16日110319NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

In present-day society, the human race is progressing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas不太懂，是说人类空前的速度做什么. Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound societal changes have come主语时现在分词谓语用复数了，而且这个动作的发出者不能试分词吧 some sufferings, and the influence of movies and television is very prominent among them. Some people assert that movies and television are more negative to young people, while the adversaries strongly contend that they have more benefits instead. From my own perspective, their views have both merits and demerits.

Granted, there could be some positive effects movies and television may bring about. In the first place, just like the saying: read books do miles没看懂, we could get to know the local conditions and customs from movies and television by limited for the fund表达不地道 as an ordinary person. For instance, by watching Downton Abbey, a British-American television series, which is definitely popular currently, we can be familiar with the aspects of hierarchy between British upper nobles and their servants at that time. In the second place, the thinking mode of foreigners can be otbained which lead us to better understand each other.

However, the opponents firmly believe that movies and television, the product of the Industrial Revolution, also have adverse effect, and they are against it for a couple of sound reasons. Firstly,numerous studies prove the fact that there is a strong link between the increase of television watching and the decline of reading ability. Hence, a generation of unimaginative couch potatoes has been created. Secondly, TV distances people because they lack adequate face-to face communication. The loss of friends and decline of competitive ability are the most immediate impact. Thirdly, the unsuitable scenses, like violent and sexual, can even affect young's development in the future.

In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent, movies and television are benefit to people. However, they can also deeply influence on people's behavior. On balance, I am convinced that the influence of movies and television is various, whether which kind of influence on you depends on the way you treat them.

-- by 会员 lunating (2012/6/18 9:46:46)

表达是个问题，很多地方不明白，建议多改改

lunating

这用的是从老师那拿的双边支持结构的模版，有一些看似很高深的句子我也没看明白==然后这篇文章由于时间的关系是分两天隔开写的，到第二天我就完全忘了之前的思路、、
不过，确实英语的表达很成问题，还有观点不鲜明，没有力度。我要学会用英文的思维来组织句子。谢谢小z亲的建议，我会好好修改的。^^

zombiee

6月17日110115 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.


No matter in which country, university professors are, without any exception, regarded as the role of educator, not to mention doing research不是这么用. However, whether the main role is to educate students or do reseatch is magnet？？ for controversy.

Admittedly, the duty of a university professor is to impart knowledge and educate people, which is the tradition since the ancient times. Also, the purpose of students attending colleges or universities is to gain various kinds of knowledge and form an own set of knowledge hierarchy. In this situation, the professors play a crucial role. In engineering management major, for example, there are many specialized courses which only fewer people know them or even are expert in them. All the students need are the professors in their department. Obviously, the  professors are essential to university students.

However, the professors in the college or university indeed need to do several research to enhance their scientific research capability so as to meet the demand of society. After all, just like scientists, they are standing at the frontiers of science and technology. It's their responsibility to make contributions in order to return socienty. More importantly, university professors need these scientific research products to confer the academic titles. What's more, it is also having impact on basic pay levers. All these force professors to allocate more time doing research. Accordingly, the role of a university professor doing research can not be ignored.

Furthermore, as the old saying goes: you're never too late to learn. Therefore, it is entirely reasonable for professors to do research to consolidate themselves. So it is going as a scientist, a CEO, a foreign executive, or other competitive positions. After all, as the enconomic globalization and technology progress, the competition is even fierce every three seconds on earth. In order to keep their jobs scurity and stability, hard work is definitely inevitable. While as a teacher, no one can deny that the most essentially work is to consider how to teach the students to learn best on not only the textbook knowledge, but also the fine personality.

All in all, although there lies various excuses to insist that the main role of a university professor is to educate students， it is pointless to make a distinction between educating students and doing research. As long as the students could benefit them in terms of accumulating research experience from their tutors and learning the necessary knowledgy they need in future.

-- by 会员 lunating (2012/6/18 8:45:35)

表达好些了，基本能看懂，但是不地道不流利，有生搬硬套的迹象，篇幅再长些，加油

zombiee

这用的是从老师那拿的双边支持结构的模版，有一些看似很高深的句子我也没看明白==然后这篇文章由于时间的关系是分两天隔开写的，到第二天我就完全忘了之前的思路、、
不过，确实英语的表达很成问题，还有观点不鲜明，没有力度。我要学会用英文的思维来组织句子。谢谢小z亲的建议，我会好好修改的。^^

-- by 会员 lunating (2012/6/18 18:55:54)

luna认识问题很准确，相信通过积累会提高不少的，加油

lunating

哈哈，谢谢小z亲，爱死你了！你给了我无限的动力ing！
下篇目标：1.语言表达 2.行文的逻辑 3.篇幅哇篇幅，我的痛><

lunating

6月18日101017 大陆
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to relax by a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise

Doing physical exercise is a much better opinion to relax compared to watching a movie or reading a book. So, I disagree that movies and books are more effective and necessary way of relaxation. In fact, people are suffering more serious illness nowadays than before for lacking of physical activities. Furthermore, doing exercise is a wonderful method to decrease pressures stem from hard working or studying. In other words, people need to maintain a balanced body which allows one to have a balance mind on top of it. Of course, the best way to achieve a balanced body is to keep a regular session of exercise.

First of all, doing daily physical exercise has long-term benefits, such as reducing the risks of many diseases, especially obesity and heart problems. In present-day society， people are facing the challenge of severe health problems. This is mainly due to unhealthy diet and irregular lifestyles. Most office workers used to eat in fast-food restaurants and intake lots of oily food or sugary food. And university students usually stay up late for studying or even playing computer games. A generation of coach potatoes has also been emerged along with the invention of TV set. All these lead to a situation urging to be solved. Under such circumstances, exercise regularlly is really helpful.

Secondly, doing physical exercise helps release a person from the heavy pressure. Nowadays, most people are becoming a sedentary society and exercise is becoming less and less part of our daily lives due to the extensive competition and burdensome pressures.The office workers, like the leader, will take unpredictable rikes n dealing
with the affairs whitin the group in his own way. And any wrong decision can lead to great loss under which he will lost his position and reputation as well. His health would easily breaks down if all the pressures accumulate to certain degree. Thus, the best choice is to doing regular exercise activities after work, like playing squash, can help him relax and relieve the pressure from work. As you can see, it really works.

Furthermore, physical exercise can improve blood circulation, speeding up the supply of nutrients and oxygen to every part of the body. Also, it can promote the ability of digestion and making our stomach stronger. Another important point worth mentioning is that it can make one become a quick, perceptive and clever person. In a word, physical exercise not only keeps people fit and strong, but also makes their life more colorful.

All that I have said above boils down to the conclusion that doing physical activities is a better choice than watching a movie or reading a book. Therefore, let us spare some time to take an active part in gyms in order to keep a healthy body.


小z亲这篇文交的比较晚，昨天提前帮你改文后，再写这篇，发现思维完全固定住了，所以等到现在。。