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whitesand

only english? OK!

good good study, day day up!!!
add oil ~add oil~ !!!

Sooooooooooooooooo easily

G-CRACKER

just get up and find i mistook babypace's English name(Sophia) for 镯子的。。。so correct it below the post!

today is the first day this year that i got up before 8:00 a.m. for consecutive 2 days, i am a little excited but catch a little cold. Hope tomorrow  will not becme heavily sick.

Early this morning, simply prepare a writing frame for AA, put here for criticism and discussion.

In this argument, the arguer concludes that....... . To support this conclusion, he/she cites/shows the evidence that.............. In addition, the arguer reasons that...... This argument is weak for three reasons.

In the first place, the arguer gratuitously assumes that...... However, this is not necessarily the case. It is quite possible that…… Without ruling out these factors, this assumption is open to doubt.

In the second place, the mere fact that……….is insufficient evidence to prove that…… The arguer fails to take other elements into consideration. For instance,…. Lacking more specific information about…. any further link between ... and .. cannot be justified.

Last but not least, the arguer’s reasoning that….is unwarranted; it is based on the unfair assumption that… Yet, this is not always the truth. It is very likely that….and that... Neglecting these additional concerns will surely put this argument into question.

To sum up, this is an unconvincing argument. To strenghen the conclusion that… the arguer needs to conduct a deep analysis of … To further substantitiate it, the arguer would have to present more evidence about……

G-CRACKER

以下是引用whitesand在2004-11-25 8:33:00的发言：

only english? OK!

good good study, day day up!!!
add oil ~add oil~ !!!

Sooooooooooooooooo easily

Hi, little white, pls do not use Chinese-English, this will put you into trouble.... just take me for example, to mix Chinese with English is really a fun for me once a time, but now, once i want to write something, i cannot resist doing a mixed style of writing. Of course, if you are aware of this point, you could avoid that trap, to some extent.

G-CRACKER

oh.... so busy a day. spend about 6 hrs to finish the outlines of gold topics edited by 古镯子, big thx！  and find the writing frame i created this morning is lack of flexibity. For analysis of argument, there are several different kind of fallacies. Yet, to use my writing frame, i will get stuck when meeting such fallacies as false analogy and non-representativeness of survy/study.  Anyway, it's ok now. Hope tomorrow, i will meet what i have prepared today.

It's dinner time, but I will order a taxi first and get all the needed things packed. Thanks for Flyinfish's advise, I dropped the idea to book a room near the test center, saving some silvers and precious time.

After eating, will go over my the wrong questions of OG... time is passing by so quickly and the toast time is becoming nearer and nearer.

Just get to know a BeiJing MM get 750 in JJ section, which calms me down... so many people can achieve high scores,  i surely can get it ..of course, taking a deviation +50 into consideration.

kate_kite

CRACKER，祝你明天考试一切顺利～

G-CRACKER

谢了，KK。藕会全力一搏的。

G-CRACKER

The last passage of my battlefield diary.

Had a cold last night and get a running rose all the day today. it seems a good prediction for my tomorrow's toast of ETS. Too smooth does not always leads to a good result. So god kids me again and offers me a little present. The running nose costs me a half roll of tissue and makes me a little sleepy now. But, fortunately, my mind is clear all the day, and i think tomorrow i will still be ok.

This evening, it began raining outside, although very small, it makes people annoied. Passed by an old woman, who said to another one that tomorrow will be surely cold. (I seldom watched TV and do not know the whether condition). Shit! I need to add some clothes tomorrow.

Though it is mid-winter, it is still not very cold here in Shanghai: about one hour ago, i killed one mosquito, which was filled with my blood. Just now, saw another mosquito flying away, so, i plug in the electronic mosquito-killer, and load the only tablet left. I do not want to bother to kill them with my hands, haha, little mosquitos, go to die! I lived in the third floor, but the trees in front of the building reaches to 6 floors high. Under the tree, it is humid and dark. Perhaps, just such an environment facilitates the proliferation of these mosquitos. Plus, for consecutive 2 weeks, i have kept my outside window open, so these insects get in….. but I closed it tonight due to the cold wether.

Okay, need to sleep liao.

The passage above was written in a status of half wake and half sleep, so kind of no purpose, just record my current thoughts.

shaft

i am waiting, waiting, and waiting for ur good news. hhehe.

sound like a woman waiting for her husband^^^^^^^   ^_^

古镯

为你祈祷～

whitesand

饼干奋勇杀鸡的英姿：右手握鼠标点答案，左手拿纸巾捏住鼻子。
最后考试中心的老师因纸巾存量严重不足，非常歉意地拎来水桶。。。