拖神小冰的大刀向G头上砍去！！！求督促，一起努力，走下去！！！

linlanjun1993

小冰加油！

clover928

加油加油~~~

蓝若痕

来看看亲~小冰加油~！

esther小冰

今天有了新的认识：
1.不能学那些NN，每天晚上睡很少，实验证明，我不能熬夜，每天至少7小时的睡眠要保证，及时时间很紧
2.每天的跑步是要坚持的，一天才会有好精力
3.刷OG这个东西是急不得的，及时第三遍快刷完了，但也还是应该空瓶心态，真心的不能急，特别是希望基础打好，现在还是觉得知识点有点散，希望刷第四遍的时候能够很好的串起来
4.跟阅读小分队的同时还是应该自己每天连一点精读，这样感觉小分队效率会更高

小小心得，加油！！！

DUKB24

今天有了新的认识：
1.不能学那些NN，每天晚上睡很少，实验证明，我不能熬夜，每天至少7小时的睡眠要保证，及时时间很紧
2.每天的跑步是要坚持的，一天才会有好精力
3.刷OG这个东西是急不得的，及时第三遍快刷完了，但也还是应该空瓶心态，真心的不能急，特别是希望基础打好，现在还是觉得知识点有点散，希望刷第四遍的时候能够很好的串起来
4.跟阅读小分队的同时还是应该自己每天连一点精读，这样感觉小分队效率会更高

小小心得，加油！！！

-- by 会员 esther小冰 (2012/5/29 18:23:14)

方法千种，适合别人的不一定适合自己，适合自己的方法最N
身体是革命的本钱，同意MM我也天天运动，一可以把自己从复习解脱出来，二可以让自己的头脑清醒下更高效的运转
OG是一本圣经，慢慢品尝哈哈哈哈

kaitlynyl

小冰加油~跑步是有必要的哦，G到最后感觉坐骨神经痛……

esther小冰

小冰加油~跑步是有必要的哦，G到最后感觉坐骨神经痛……

-- by 会员 kaitlynyl (2012/5/30 9:26:50)

恩呢，我就是觉得我不运动不跑步离shi就不远啦。。。。。

esther小冰

5.29-5.30
SC：重刷og100-140，两天只弄了10题，每次不想看了，又告诉自己也就这么几小题，咬咬牙就过了，大概总结了下代词的问题，不完善，发现曼哈顿论坛里ron的理解很好
RC: 精读4篇OG（每天2篇）
   阅读小分队，坚持
单词: list19 list20
各位，晚安，要去与床亲密接触去啦~~~~

esther小冰

求教：对preposition+noun+verbing is wrong的理解

题目来自prep08
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.


A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

Ron的解释：
first off, the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN. (that isn't usually the case, so, if you're in doubt, you should strike choices with this sort of construction.)

for instance:
i've never heard of bees stinging dogs
WRONG. this is not an issue of whether you've heard of bees themselves; it's an issue of whether you've heard of their stinging dogs.

...results in the act of stinging causing...
WRONG. this doesn't result in the act of stinging itself; it results in what is caused by the act of stinging.

i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey.
CORRECT. this time, the picture is actually of my cousin, so we're good.

therefore, (a) and (d) are wrong because of "...results in the act of stinging causing...".

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the pronoun "this" in (a) doesn't refer to any particular noun. this consideration also kills (a).

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you can't say "the stinger results in...".
"results in..." can only be used when it's LITERALLY TRUE. for instance, you could say that the attempt resulted in failure, since the attempt ITSELF ended in failure.
if you understand this literal meaning, then it goes without saying that you can't use this sort of construction for physical objects.
TAKEAWAY:
you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything.
this kills choices (c) and (d), in which "stinger" is the subject of the verb "results".

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if you have "preposition + NOUN + VERBing", then "VERBing" is just a modifier, and can be dropped without changing the surrounding grammar.
therefore, the sentence should still make sense, in context, if you write it as just "preposition + NOUN", without the "VERBing" modifier.
therefore, the sentence at hand can be reduced to "... results in the act of stinging".
that's incorrect -- the act of stinging is not the result here; the fact that the stinger is heavily barbed does not cause the actual act of stinging.

go ahead and apply this principle to the examples above:

i've never heard of bees stinging dogs
--> i've never heard of bees
doesn't make sense anymore. wrong.

..results in the act of stinging causing...
--> ..results in the act of stinging
doesn't makes sense anymore. wrong.

i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey.
--> i have a picture of my cousin.
still makes sense, so this one is ok.

NN们帮忙看看，我不是很理解他说的，谢谢啦~~~

鸩鸩

同意保持身体的良好状态。睡眠好精神才好，小冰加油啊，身体是革命本钱