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【写作小分队】6.9考前要写30篇,老年人也要写作文呐

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 楼主| 发表于 2012-6-5 23:26:36 | 只看该作者

老年人写累了……

It is more important to choose friends more that have fun with than to choose friend that will help you when you need them.
Everyone has some close friends of quite different features such as humor, optimism, helpfulness, intelligence, trustiness. We would like to spend time with interesting friends for fun, share ideas with like-minded ones and help each other when in trouble as family. When it comes to the question of which kind of the friends, funny ones or helpful ones, is more important, people have personal choice based on one’s own situation and respective experience. As for me, helpful friends are of more importance in my life.

Admittedly, a joyous relationship is the basic of every friendship. When we chat with friends of same ideas or common hobby, the fun from the friendship can release (the) pressure we got from work and life and make us happy and enjoyable. It is natural that no one likes to stay with a guy who always feels boring. In the situation that you just need some fun or kill time, a friend you can have fun with is a pretty good choice. However, such kind of friendship only based on simple fun is not genuine.

As our life will not always be smooth, when we are in trouble, a helpful friend can give us a hand. A friend just for fun will disappear from your world immediately. The relationship merely bases on fun is feeble. I have heard of a joke that borrowing money from friends is the moment one gets to know how few his real friends are. Therefore, one who would try his best to help when I am in trouble is my real friend. Only this kind

Additionally, even though we are not in trouble, we are facing many choices in our life. A considerate and experienced friend could be quite helpful to give us some advices. For example, when I was seeking a job after graduation, a friend of mine gave me a lot of precious advices on the preparation of the interviews and decision making between two offers. Besides, he encouraged me often when I was not self-confident and worrying about not getting a good job. Without his help, I could not even find a job! Therefore, friends’ help is of significant importance in our life.

In the end, we share opinions and learn from each other because of the human natures: people need company; people have a strong will to feel supported. A friend with just fun can meet the first demand but fail to meet the later one while a helpful friend is a perfect choice for the both.

To sum up, as have been discussed above, though funny friend is necessary in our life, the friends who can help you when you need is more important. Therefore, I disagree with the topic statement.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-6-14 20:47:33 | 只看该作者

【20120614】

6月9日考试前写了13篇JJ,写完还是很有感觉的。独立作文中了JJ第一篇,国人的JJ预测真的超牛掰的。但还不知道成绩啊,好忐忑。
听大神建议,买了《The Random House Handbook&ractice Book》,听说是美国人锻炼写作的工具书。一是为了准备即将到来的第二次GMAT,和潜在的第三次TOEFL,以方便为申请写Essay打基础。
目前坛子里还没有这本书的推荐和资源。所以准备边看边把笔记和习作发上来。希望自己不是说说而已。去作业去鸟……
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发表于 2012-6-21 21:44:45 | 只看该作者
双爪支持!最近开始写PS和推荐信(老师竟然让我自己写),又枯竭了啊~
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