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maxket

Have you been upset because you did not win? Have you had quarry with your teammates just because their mistakes resulting in losing game? Have you felt that you did not learn anything from games just because what you whole mind is on winning?



If you did not experience those before, you may think that playing a game is only fun when you win.



When it comes to game, the majority of people believe that the aim of it is entertain oneself. You will have an upset or bad emotion after a losing game because your view that playing a game is only fun when you win, which makes you to deviate from the original purpose. A couple of years ago, the news said that an old person died from heartache with the stimulation of losing a game.This disaster tells us that the dead is only due to losing a game. The more strongly you want to win, the sadder you feel when you lose. So it must be noted that fun has nothing to do with win.



Do you want to lose your friends after a game? There is no doubt that the answer is no. According to investigate, most people prefer to play game with their friends. Sometime game need teamwork, in contract individual mistake may cause the team’s failure. If you hold the view that playing is only fun when you win, you may lose your tamper and even quarrel with your teammates-your friends, which do harm to your friendship and make you alone in the end. It often happens in some balls teams that former best friends become strangers or even enemies. You will be regret after several years, but you have no chance to rebuild the friendship. So your ambition to win may hurt your friendship.



In addition to the sense of accomplishment, many other things we can gain in a game, such as experience, knowledge, strategy and so on. For example when you take part in a game to guess, you can learn much from others and the riddle you do not know. In other game, when you compete with other, you will apply some strategies to win. No matter whether you win, you can take the experience. So we can find some other more valuable things in a game, why do not you only want to win?



In the other hand, the sense of win maybe brings you more joy than any other factors and it will attract you to win again. However it is not the whole of the game. More you will lose even though you win in the end, as you concentrate your mind on winning. So the view that playing a game is only fun when you win is misleading.

maxket

忘了写题目了~Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is  fun only when you win.

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