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若风

Spending how much time on watching TV among children has been increasingly debated within the whole society . Admittedly , limiting the time of the children who want to watch the boring and tedious shows or programs is a right way to change their condition in the school . I agree , however , to offer them sufficient time to enjoy the beautiful world , to absorb the unlimited source of the knowledge and to recognize themselves from watching TV .
Some of the programs always provide a way for children to appreciate the delicate and majestic world . My little brother who is always curious about the animal world often watches the program showing the animal world of the Africa or the virtual world of the dinosaur . Consequently , he has been paying more and more attention to the delicate and amazing world . He always asks me plenty of questions . For example , why the horse love run in the prairie or why the spider only weave one net in its life . The process of watching those programs not only make my brother recognize the world better , it also open his brain to spawn a great deal of method to solve these spectacle . It is the watching TV that provide a efficient way for children to know the world .
There are always numerous shows or programs presented a great deal of information or technology of the new theories or the novel ideas . The Discovery showing plenty of method of technology well exemplifies the program as a powerful tool to transmit the knowledge . What we can see in the Discovery is a spectacular world , so spectacular that we will be addicted to the principle of how the engine of F1 works or how the helicopter fly only depending on two verticalwings . Absorbing knowledge from these programs is , as far as the pedagogy concerned with , not a approach adult can use only but a efficacious way for the children . So , why do not we provide a way making our children voyage on their sea of knowledge ?
Ultimately , a shows of the exploiting or searching the internal world of the human also have good effect on the children . For instance , the Confucius believe that a people should be taught of recognizing himself from his childhood , because a child is like a paper which we can draw various kinds of colors no matter what the color represented . So , it is essential to the human especially in his childhood to receive copious discoveries of his internal world . Certainly , watching TV can satisfy the process .

若风

求各位大牛狠拍，谢谢，好人一生平安

Crystaljoy

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