ISSUE 32 （关于选专业是否由将来的工作决定）。求拍啊。。谢谢

yzy0704

With the global economy developing faster and faster, some serious phenomenon have come into our society. For example , the opportunity to find a job is becoming less because of the rapid growing of human beings. So many people argues that before we enter a college, we should choose a field of study which is easy to find jobs after we graduate. However, as far as I am concerned, it is quite wrong. Different subjects fit for different kinds of people, and it is your own hobby that you should depend on to choose your own field.

If each of us is willing to choose the so-called hot subjects, such as engineering and economies, who else would like to care about the agriculture? In the famous book “Principles of Economy” we have learn about that economic laws can not solve all the problems. The economic laws have told us that we should do some things which will bring about the most profits, but if a country just follow this law, it may order all of the farmers to change their fields into industrial lands, then surely it will bring about a serious of problems and cut the source of our food! From this we could draw a conclusion that it is not the profit that lead humans to work, but the need of human beings.


And if some people still hold the point that choose the so-called hot subjects will surely ensure their jobs in future, I have to poor a basin of cold water on their head. From the account we could see that more and more students choose fields relevant to the economy, and the rate of unemployment has been growing so fast. Many people only consider that there are lots of jobs related to the economy, but they have not seen the number of competitor.


Besides the two opinions above, we should also think carefully about what we want to do and what we are willing to be, and these two point should make a influence on your choice. If you choose a field which you are really bored of, you will never perform well in this field, though it may be a job with high salary. We all know the giant of physics, Einstein. In his early years, he was working in a patent bureau. But then he realized that it was not a job that fit him well. Then Einstein chose to do research by himself. No one would say that doing scientific jobs could earn more than working in a company, but he chose the former one, and then became so famous that everybody knows him. What I want to say is that there exists no good jobs or bad jobs, and we choose one because it fits you best.


In a word, take it serious when you choose a field of study, and your final choice should include your serious thinking about your own interests. If you only consider about the availability of jobs, maybe you will regret one day.

yzy0704

5555又沉了。。

普渡哥

If each of people is willing to choose the so-called hot subjects,

学会each 的用法，这里可以用every people or every one.

each of us, each of them.....

yzy0704

噢，这样子。。

竹林中人

rapid growing of human beings？说的不够准确，rapid growing of human population，人口数量的增长而不是人的长大。
we should choose a field of study which is easy to find jobs after we graduate。这句话用depend on 也许比用which定语从句要好。
choose the so-called hot subjects will surely ensure？choose——>choosing
这篇作文整体看起来还行，继续努力！

yzy0704

谢谢斑竹大人。。一定努力！