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楼主
发表于 2004-9-11 16:54:00 | 只看该作者

再帖一次试试。我的作文。

题目:Think of the most interesting class you have ever taken.  Why did you enjoy this class so much?  Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.


作文:


The most interesting class that I have ever taken is one of the management class I had with Mr. Du Plessis.



First of all, because Mr. Du Plessis is the general manager of the ABSA, one of the major bank in South Africa, he has plenty working experiens on financial and economic fields and managing people. As a result, his class has been full of practical examples, just like helping a client to build up his/her particular investment potfolios.



Secondly, Mr. Du Plessis involves all the students in the classroom into his presentations. He asked students form groups and chanllenge each other on their opions about the subject of ethic management.  



Thirdly, Mr. Du Plessis invited a brokery officer to the class to explain the processes and management environment of the stock trading industry. This helps the students understand the stock trading industry more detailly. This also gives the students a chance to have a insight of the industry.

沙发
发表于 2004-9-11 17:31:00 | 只看该作者

your essay seems too short. It's better off if you revise it before paste it here.

板凳
发表于 2004-9-12 01:07:00 | 只看该作者

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=63945&page=1

BTW, as I went through all topics in TWE, i don't think it is among TWE topics.  or my short memory?

please indicate whether it is TWE or other tests.

地板
发表于 2004-9-12 20:29:00 | 只看该作者
难道ETS添题库了?
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-9-15 01:46:00 | 只看该作者

多谢各位,是pp里的题。

to bryony:

我不是故意不按规格发帖的。这两天一直不能发帖和回帖,只是想试一下却发出来了。

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发表于 2004-9-15 16:23:00 | 只看该作者

that is all right. lyle.

better pactice on TWE 185 topics.

From what you have written, i think you haven't grasp the idea of what a satisfactory writing should be.  We have some sample essay here. Please take full advantage of them. You can make a search by the key word TWE. And this is why we insist on the standard format of the title.

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