[求助]我的处女作。TWE 184 请求斑竹批阅打分。

rowe

TWE184

Some people hold the opinion that they like to study alone but other people prefer study in a group. Everyone has his own preference. I would like to study with a group of people.

Those who choose to study alone would say that the reason is that studying alone can make them learn to think by themselves and independently . Although I agree with them, studying in a group doesn't prevent people from thinking things independently.  They still have this freedom and right. They would give each other some time to solve one problem individually and then discuss it together. So studying together also has this advantage.

Further more,  studying with a group can develop the spirit of team. Nowadays team work is  an important skill and experience to  a person.  Those who prefer study alone may have the disadvantage to trust themselves only and have no habit to discuss with others.  On the other hand, those who have a habit to study with others can naturally cooperate with their colleagues well.

Last but not least, to those who like to  study together success would prefer them. In  China, there is  an old proverb "of a couple of people ,there may be a teacher of mine."  Everyone will have his character and value. People would learn all kinds of things from the folks around him. Maybe others' idea can give you numerous sparkles of mind and can give you creative clues. This point cannot be achieve by those who study alone.

  

All in all , I personally think studying in a group has more advantages than studying alone.  The experience of cooperating with other persons is wonderful, which people who prefer to study alone cannot taste and feel.   

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-10 22:38:54编辑过]

rowe

I am sorry. I didn't know it.

Could you give me some comments about this composition?

TWE 184

Some people hold the opinion that they like to study alone but other people prefer study in a group. Everyone has his own preference. I would like to study with a group of people.

Those who choose to study alone would say that the reason is that studying alone can make them learn to think by themselves and independently . Although I agree with them, studying in a group doesn't prevent people from thinking things independently.        They still have this freedom and right. They would give each other some time to solve one problem individually and then discuss it together. So studying together also has this advantage.

Further more,        studying with a group can develop the spirit of team. Nowadays team work is        an important skill and experience to        a person.        Those who prefer study alone may have the disadvantage to trust themselves only and have no habit to discuss with others.        On the other hand, those who have a habit to study with others can naturally

        cooperate with their colleague well.

Last but not least, to those who like to        study together success would prefer them. In        China, there is        an old proverb "of a couple of people ,there may be a teacher of mine."        Everyone will have his character and value. People would learn all kinds of things from the folks around him. Maybe others' idea can give you numerous sparkles of mind and can give you creative clues. This point cannot be achieve by those who study alone.

        

All in all , I personally think studying in a group has more advantages than studying alone.        The experience of cooperating with other persons is wonderful, which people who prefer to study alone cannot taste and feel.                

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-10 22:43:43编辑过]

rowe

非常感谢pumpkin的悉心指导。对于你对我的鼓励，我感到受宠若惊。没想到第一次作文你给我的评价还挺高。尤其是象你这么一位高手的评语，真是给我莫大的鼓舞与信心。我一定会努力的，请多指教。

soaring

以下是引用pumpkin在2004-9-17 5:38:00的发言：

反复反复反复

自己的文章一定要修改修改再修改

反复写一个题目2-3遍, 比写2-3个题目更能提高写作~~

南瓜JJ好经典的说！

yetemwok

可以看到魔板的影子,但是不错,RATER PERHAPS WILL NOT BE HAPPY WITH THE LENGTH. YOU WILL BE UP. KEEP TRYING