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发表于 2012-3-2 22:43:46 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.


As the technology has improved rapidly, humans increasingly rely on the instruments to solve the problems in industry and academic area. In my opinion, in this case, it does not necessarily mean that, however, the ability of humans' brain will surly deteriorate.




Admittedly, as the technology has dramatically improved, the people's inborn weakness, such as greed and laziness, constrains or even weakens the ability of thinking, and results in the accompanying troubles. For instance, the Internet, one of the most valuable inventions, makes it convenient to get the information and find out the solution to the problems in our daily life or in academic field. On the other hand, however, the Internet is utilized by the lazy ones to copy or embezzle the theory provided by others, resulting in the academic cheating. In addition, students would prefer to search for the answer of the homework on the Internet instead of critical and independent thinking by themselves . From this passive point of view, the technology turns out to weaken the ability of people to think.    



However, on the other hand, technology, regarded as the most essential factor of productivity, ameliorates our living conditions in practice. For example, in the medical field, Attributing to the dramatic progress of medical treatment, people can be cured in a short time without any pain. Also, technology improves the life quality of people, freeing people from heavy routine housework and chores, which, in turn, enables them to spend more time in forming insight into society.



Moreover, as the technology develops, people may encounter the difficulties or problems that they have never met before. For example, scientist have started to study the microcosmic structure of virus, which benefits the later medical science and biology, since the microscope was invented. To settle these new problems, the inquisitive nature would stimulate the ability of creative thinking, which may lead to establish new analyzing frame or theory. As the scope of research has been broadened, more effective technology is needed, and as a result, the interaction between the human mind and technology would benefit the process of comprehending the world and also human ourselves.  



insum, to evaluate the ability of humans' thinking, we should consider the basic object apart from the influence of the technology. No matter how the technology influences the people, humans' unremitting pursuit for perfection and development , a continuing discovery for the unknown world as well, indicates the brains of human beings have been working and never deteriorated. So it is hard to conclude whether the technology is disadvantageous to the humans' thinking or not. That all depends on what your object is and how you use the technology.
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沙发
发表于 2012-3-3 00:27:42 | 只看该作者
get the information——》the不需要
发现你很喜欢用the啊,建议你查查这个词怎么用吧
另外你的第一段没有表现出你对这个问题的深刻认识和分析,在第一段你可以写写自己对这题目的认识的,并对自己下面要写的内容有个大致的概括。
humans to think for themselves 这几个单词的理解很重要,不知道你注意到没?
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-3-3 10:51:25 | 只看该作者
谢谢,请问第一段里面要怎么写呢?是不是要把最后一段有关人类追求引导科技运用的论述提前在第一段陈述出来呢?
地板
发表于 2012-3-4 21:03:46 | 只看该作者
谢谢,请问第一段里面要怎么写呢?是不是要把最后一段有关人类追求引导科技运用的论述提前在第一段陈述出来呢?
-- by 会员 jdef1028 (2012/3/3 10:51:25)

第一段可以写写跟题目话题相关的背景知识,也可以写写你的认识,比如这个问题实际上是问的什么,涉及到什么,需要考虑到什么,等等,表明你对题目的理解的深度和把握度
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-3-7 15:26:12 | 只看该作者
谢谢,请问第一段里面要怎么写呢?是不是要把最后一段有关人类追求引导科技运用的论述提前在第一段陈述出来呢?
-- by 会员 jdef1028 (2012/3/3 10:51:25)


第一段可以写写跟题目话题相关的背景知识,也可以写写你的认识,比如这个问题实际上是问的什么,涉及到什么,需要考虑到什么,等等,表明你对题目的理解的深度和把握度
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/3/4 21:03:46)



要写多少呢第一段
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发表于 2012-3-7 16:29:36 | 只看该作者
谢谢,请问第一段里面要怎么写呢?是不是要把最后一段有关人类追求引导科技运用的论述提前在第一段陈述出来呢?
-- by 会员 jdef1028 (2012/3/3 10:51:25)



第一段可以写写跟题目话题相关的背景知识,也可以写写你的认识,比如这个问题实际上是问的什么,涉及到什么,需要考虑到什么,等等,表明你对题目的理解的深度和把握度
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/3/4 21:03:46)




要写多少呢第一段
-- by 会员 jdef1028 (2012/3/7 15:26:12)

不多,不超过4行,100词之内吧
7#
发表于 2012-3-7 17:37:19 | 只看该作者
个人觉得第一段写太多了浪费精力
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发表于 2012-3-11 15:43:37 | 只看该作者
求解析 human to think themselves :指的是人类应该学会运用自己的智慧,光靠科技带来的益处,而不考虑其他方面所遇到的问题,比如平常遇到什么困难喜欢靠机器,不喜欢自己思考什么的。机器不会思考的,但人会的。这样还好点展开body paragraph 呢?
9#
发表于 2012-3-11 15:45:30 | 只看该作者
各位怎么看的?上面的帖子只不过是我观点的一部分。我正准备写这篇issue呢。。。。
10#
发表于 2012-3-11 16:51:31 | 只看该作者
各位怎么看的?上面的帖子只不过是我观点的一部分。我正准备写这篇issue呢。。。。
-- by 会员 jurat911 (2012/3/11 15:45:30)

列个完整的提纲吧,上面的太碎片化了
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