issue 133 我第二篇issue, 不才，参考别人的思路写出来的，大家能帮我看看最好了

biolady

题目： Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
      Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.
全文：

Some people may think that today's world is more complex than before, and the value of history is declining. However, I maintain that we can learn lots of things from history and history can guide people to make important decision.

 History teaches us the establishment of our country as well as the origin and development of society, which is important for historical education. Frome the aspect of moralism, history decide our ideology and values. In arts, large number of valuable historical relics give a special description of our culture and become spiritual treasure for all humans. Besides, wars occurred in the past give us warning and introspection.

 The elements which help us make important decisions are various. There are evidences that history is involved. Many policies are based on experience from old times, such as the reform and opening-up policy broached by Den Xiaoping, which highly improve the development of China, is a revolution from the lagging policy of Qing Dynasty. Besides these, the success of many scientific research is derived from the mistake of former scientists. Furthermore, for ourselves, "Failure is the mother of success." Any kinds of embarrassing things and failure can help us know about our shortcomings and thus lead to progress. From the above, the beneficial influence of history on making important decisions is obvious.

 Even though the world has changed a lot, some regular patterns are still stable, such as morality and human nature. In terms of this, history definitely becomes a way of showing perspective on problems present. With the help of history, we can dissect a matter and generate innovation.

提纲：

历史告诉我们什么：

1.政治方面：社会的起源、发展以及国家制度的建立

2.道德方面：让我们了解社会的价值观和意识形态的建立

3.艺术方面：让我们了解宝贵的人类精神财富

4.军事方面：战争带我们的警醒与反思

什么可以帮助人们作出重要决定？

1.政治方面：国家政策很多是基于过去失败的教训，例如相比于闭关锁国导致了国家落后，改革开放推动中国迅速发展。

2.科学方面: 对前人研究的质疑促进了科学发展。

3.对于个人：过去经历过的事情带给我们很多经验教训，使我们少犯错，多进步。

由此证明历史是可以帮助人们作出重要决定的。

虽然现在世界变化很大，很多规律是不变的，比如到的和人性。鉴于此，历史可以为我们提供解决问题的参考。在历史的帮助下，我们还可以深入研究事物并且从中创新。

竹林中人

这篇作文字数明显偏少啊，大概只有270左右，所以内容显得单薄，写的第一点不够充分，觉得需要有例子充实下比较好，另外关于这个题目，我的个人看法有：这个是因果形式的题目，那么思考的角度有：这个理由本身是不是成立，本题中说当今社会跟过去很大不一样，是不是真的？有些地方可能有巨变，也有不变的或者微弱变化的啊，比如宗教信仰，这点你可以发挥下，再就是因果之间是否必然，有因，是否必定导致题目中的结果，是不是也要分类说明，最后你可不可以综合说一下，过去和现在的关系，这样我觉得比较全面了，你认为呢

普渡哥

加一些过渡词。最好用英文写提纲。

skily22

举些例子

biolady

有道理啊

biolady

我正修改它

普渡哥

中文提纲特别好，但是文章太短了，没有很好用你提纲的优势。

jameszhm

中文提纲特别好，但是文章太短了，没有很好用你提纲的优势。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/2/29 10:19:38)

我也觉得提纲很不错 个人觉得第一段可以不用这种传统的写法 你可以先展开写历史相关的一些东西作为引子，不必单刀直入，可以参考OG的范文。

jameszhm

第二点，个人觉得例子要展开，而且可以正反论证下，而不是当做事实一样告诉别人，其实这些例子也只是你的视角，不一定是对的，要展开说明你的理由~~就写这么多 期待你的回复跟探讨

biolady

谢谢各位的意见，我会改进作文的