以下是引用rt316在2004-8-27 23:19:00的发言:
以下是引用ztlbox在2004-8-27 3:22:00的发言: Q18: In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
- In California today (today的位置不是很好,时间状语修饰整句,最好放在句首), Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago (Hispanics和a decade ago作比较,比较对象不匹配), when it (it的指代不明确) was about 35 percent.
- Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43 percent of them are Hispanic (主从成分混乱), compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
- Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35 percent a decade ago.
- Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics (表达不精确) under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, whereas it was about 35 percent.
- Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California (表达不精确) account for more than 43 percent, unlike (比较结构错) a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
请教:
1。C.这里是否主语在比较啊?句子挺顺的,就是后面的compared with about a dacade ago.觉得是不是应该加上“that”。
Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with that about 35 percent a decade ago.
2。B,主从成分混乱? 第一次听见这个概念。可以解释一下具体什么意思?我觉得不混啊。只是好像of them和前面的of the californian重复了.
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