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发表于 2012-2-12 01:59:26 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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发表于 2012-2-12 02:11:14 | 只看该作者
我建议你直接发在上面,不要上传啊,要不每个人都得下载看,不便操作啊!
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-13 00:56:35 | 只看该作者
43 The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.

With the high speed development of modern society, our life style has been more and more fast. But we can stop it unless we abandon something we had had and run away from the busy city rhythm. I have a question that whether the increasingly rapid paces of our life bring our more problems, or it could solve those problems with the same speed. Obviously, we could face more problem and do not have time to get rid of them.

Admittedly, the high speed life style brings us more financial reward so that our society could continue to develop and create more chance for individuals to make their dream come true, people live in this style might earn more money and have privilege to enjoy some superior entertainments. But, they also need enough time even a long time extra-work to finish their assignments of company. The more wealth they possess the more time they need to spend in their work. So that their must increase their efficiency and compress their leisure time. So living in the high speed paces of life is a very efficient method for some people to solve more problems in limited time.

Nevertheless, we could not ignore a problem that with such top-speed of life style, whether our body could keep healthy and support us to take a long time working. After all, we are human not a machine, if we work so hard and never concern on our self-health,some diseases would promote us have to stop the work and to resting, those break might entire devastate the career of someone even bring him to died. Indeed, the rapid pace of life could enhance our fundamental economic development, yet we lost time when we should take a break and it will bring more problems that we can not handle.

Compare to some rural area with low speed of life where people just enjoy a easy and comfortable life, the high speed of life area also need to solve a other important problem that not only we lose time to rest but also we miss some friends because of those heavy job. In the modern city with rapid rhythm, in order to sate the necessary of work, we never have time to play even to talk with our friends. And gradually, we forget each other and only addict in our own job and ignoring become more normally, even that we might never feel lonely for the all-days job, but that is not only reasons that the high speed rhythm bring to us.

In sum, the increasingly rapid pace of life will bring more chances to solve problem. But in order to solve those problem form the essential points and avoiding new problems, we need to leave some of time to relax ourselves and to keep our own life speed in a suitable range.
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发表于 2012-2-13 05:57:38 | 只看该作者
With the high speed development of modern society, our life style has been more and more fast
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