GWD12-20

gonghao

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

1. 【Approved April 24, 1800】, 【the act of Congress】（ that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C）., also established 看A的时候，第一眼觉的不顺眼，放在一边了，主要是逗号的关系没看清。also是副词不是连词，这是我一开始犹豫的原因
2. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established －－一开始也选了B，但是发现making 不对，前面有which was approved April 24, 1800的时态标志，如果是动词的话，该用过去式形式，另外also established，证明了这一点。如果式分词做修饰语的话，我觉的前的奇怪，因为前面有了一个非限制性定语从句，后面再用分词修饰显的非常的奇怪，一般非限制性定语从句修饰完主语后跟的都是动词。如果非要做分词修饰加个and表明是修饰成分的并列不是更好吗？否则到底是动词还是修饰词呢?动词肯定不对，之前说了，分词我觉的要加and，一来表示是修饰成分的并列，二来有动作顺延的感觉，但是前面是－ed分词后面+and+－ing似乎又不好。
3. The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established －－－－肯定不对，名词+ed分词修饰+逗号+非限制性定语从句修饰主语+逗号+and+句子。句子+逗号+句子，但是“名词+ed分词修饰+逗号+非限制性定语从句修饰主语”没看见谓语在哪里，一堆修饰的句子都是修饰主语
4. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established －－－D的解释和B关于making是分词修饰的解释差不多。我觉的1.如过是分词，应该用and连接，但是前面的是-ed，后面用ing又不好。2.可能又被理解成动词的歧异，如果是这样的话，主语应该前置，且应该是用一般过去时
5. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing－－－establishing就是这个错，改成过去时就对

lexie

以下是引用scorp_w在2005-10-23 19:39:00的发言：

做大全的时候我发现了一条这样的规律！当一个中心词有一长一段，或两个长的修饰语，那么正确的选项是把中心词放中间，修饰分别放两边！这样引起歧义的机会小！

A和E的比较是句子重心的问题！一般来说，按原文较准确！

呵呵 很经典哦 同感

lancome130

答案是A。

1. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

2. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established （which was 是多余的）
3. The act of Congress approved
                   April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established

4. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established（不知道是哪个act of congress 发出established）
5. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing
                   

其实本题的考察重点在于：that从句修饰的那个action，是实现了established这个动作的那个action，除了a选项其他选项都没有表达出这层意思，这也是我们在选答案的时候的一种说不出的语感。

findjuhl

答案是E，also establishing 分词做伴随的状语

A选项不够简洁，使得主谓分的太远，不够清晰明了。

请注意句意，原文这整个一句话到底是在强调the act 建立了图书馆，还是建立了一系列法规规定，做为整体的结果，建立了图书馆。建立这个动作只能由人发出，而不能是这项运动。所以also establishing做伴随的状语，逻辑主语并非句子的主语而是人。

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MaccMichAA

以下是引用findjuhl在2006-9-25 23:34:00的发言：

答案是E，also establishing 分词做伴随的状语

A选项不够简洁，使得主谓分的太远，不够清晰明了。

请注意句意，原文这整个一句话到底是在强调the act 建立了图书馆，还是建立了一系列法规规定，做为整体的结果，建立了图书馆。建立这个动作只能由人发出，而不能是这项运动。所以also establishing做伴随的状语，逻辑主语并非句子的主语而是人。

establishing觉得有表示动作持续进行的嫌疑 句子重心意义也变化

kennypl

 A.the act of Congress that made

这里that就近修饰congress了,似乎逻辑意思不对,我也觉得E好

NN给点意见

lucyzl517

以下是引用findjuhl在2006-9-25 23:34:00的发言：

答案是E，also establishing 分词做伴随的状语

A选项不够简洁，使得主谓分的太远，不够清晰明了。

请注意句意，原文这整个一句话到底是在强调the act 建立了图书馆，还是建立了一系列法规规定，做为整体的结果，建立了图书馆。建立这个动作只能由人发出，而不能是这项运动。所以also establishing做伴随的状语，逻辑主语并非句子的主语而是人。

 晕！ 这位GG既然都看出来原文是强调建立图书馆的怎么还选E

yaoshuming

以下是引用pebbles在2005-9-26 10:38:00的发言：

A "Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established"

这个句子很好,但是为什么主语the act of Congress和谓语also established之间有个逗号呢?这样不是fragmented sentences吗? 如果没有这个逗号, A应该是最好的.

哪位在OG中看过这种长主语和谓语之间用逗号分开的,请指点一下!

顶这个问题？哪位nn来解答一些？这个逗号是我排除A选项的原因

xiangqinzh

原文这样说,因此选E

"An Act to make further provision for the removal and accommodation of the Government of the United States," approved April 24, 1800 National Archives and Records Administration, Records of the U.S. Senate

搜索了原文,觉得A的逻辑意思不对

act是法令,provision规定

E Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new

federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing  the Library of Congress.

是法令在April 24, 1800通过,国会的这个法令做出了把美国的政府搬到Washington的规定,

再看A

1. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

而A 中 Congress that made provision 定语从句通常是就近修饰国会,当然这个逻辑也能说的过去,当然that也可以跳跃修饰act,

但最大的问题是 the act of Congress 中心词是act 建立图书观,显然不合逻辑

而E中also establishing  the Library of Congress.是表示伴随结果,跟OG259上那道bringing 一样,这里 establishing  不需要逻辑主语

下面是很好的验证,图书管是"  " 的结果

April 24, 1800: The Library of Congress is established by the
   "Act to Make Provision for the Removal and Accommodation of the Government of the U.S." While originally only members of Congress and other government officials are allowed to use the facilities, it later opens its doors to the public.

April 24, 1800: The Library of Congress is established by the
   "Act to Make Provision for the Removal and Accommodation of the Government of the U.S." While originally only members of Congress and other government officials are allowed to use the facilities, it later opens its doors to the public.

http://law.enotes.com/federal-about/chronology

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