[求助]03-03-35 04-01-21 03-08-39 几道语法题

zhoushao

In the initial planning for theater, auditorium, but any room intended primarily for listening, acoustics is a major consideration.

感觉BUT错了，但不知怎么改，也不明确这句的意思。

The snapper, a large-headed fish with a long dorsal fin, is named to its characteristic way of suddenly, shutting its mouth.

这句怎么改，To 不应该为after吗？

Communal dance, as a powerful symbol of mutual regard and cooperation group, underlies enduring traditions in folk dancing.

mutual regard前不应加冠词吗？

谢谢大家的帮忙!!

唐三彩

1. but---->and

2/3, 请参考新出炉的语法笔记，很详细。

2. suddenly maybe wrong, but named to also be changed to named after.......

3. cooperation group----〉group cooperation

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-10 7:42:36编辑过]

marshial

以下是引用zhoushao在2004-8-10 7:02:00的发言：

03-03-35

In the initial planning for theater, auditorium, but any room intended primarily for listening, acoustics is a major consideration.

感觉BUT错了，但不知怎么改，也不明确这句的意思。前后是并列关系，可改为and

04-01-21

The snapper, a large-headed fish with a long dorsal fin, is named to its characteristic way of suddenly, shutting its mouth.

这句怎么改，To 不应该为after吗？to是错误的，看看是否可改为for

03-08-39

Communal dance, as a powerful symbol of mutual regard and cooperation group, underlies enduring traditions in folk dancing.

mutual regard前不应加冠词吗？   这里是表示抽象的概念，mutual regard and group cooperation 对称关系

谢谢大家的帮忙!!

pengstone

以下是引用zhoushao在2004-8-10 7:02:00的发言：

03-03-35

In the initial planning for theater, auditorium, but any room intended primarily for listening, acoustics is a major consideration.

感觉BUT错了，但不知怎么改，也不明确这句的意思。

对于剧院、礼堂以及任何用于享受听觉的场所，在最初的计划中，声学是一项主要的考虑

04-01-21

The snapper, a large-headed fish with a long dorsal fin, is named to its characteristic way of suddenly, shutting its mouth.

这句怎么改，To 不应该为after吗？

be named for

03-08-39

Communal dance, as a powerful symbol of mutual regard and cooperation group, underlies enduring traditions in folk dancing.

mutual regard前不应加冠词吗？

属于抽象概念的名词可不加冠词

谢谢大家的帮忙!!

zhoushao

谢谢

只是第二题中是SUDDENLY也错了

marshial

of suddently shutting its mouth.....，估计中间那个逗号不应有。

zhoushao

谢谢ＧＧ我在查查

marshial

看到相关的材料，那个逗号确实没有，属于打印错误！！！

zhoushao

嘻嘻,我也查到了