第一次写TWE啊~~写的一定很兰,还请各位高人指点~~~

legendend

万分感谢 pumpkin &    marshial ,     HOHO, marshial大大实在太牛了~~~改完后看的我直喷火啊~~激动ing(象devours your tedious time , 我从没想到devour可以这样用啊,精彩)  后来的朋友不看我写的不要紧.   一定,一定要看看 marshial 更正后的版本~~

题目o u agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction(such as novels and short stories ) is more enjoyable than watching moves.

To spend time in the cinema or in the library is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly attractive qualities of watching movie, and neglect the genuinely advantage of reading fiction.

Under the remarks of the invention of movie, a revolution of entertainment, many cinemas are called into existence in our cities; meanwhile, people in increasing numbers have been pushed into the movie theaters these years. It is no doubt watching movie is an easy and comfortable way to share a story with the performers in front of the screen; however, some intrinsically confined characteristics such as: immobility, space and price are still exist.

Maybe the books are so common for us that it seems a disastrous fact that fiction are now losing their appeal for many citizens. The first reason that I support reading fiction is it is obviously much easier to carry a book than a DVD by people. Reading fiction can take place anywhere and anytime, whether in a subway or in a plane, whether at the lunch break or at the midnight. For instance, subways or streetcars see many students whose homes are far from the place they are studying spending hours and hours on their way to school everyday. To read some fiction, share some exciting or sentimental experience with the protagonists in the fiction are able to not only making the time fly, but also extending the vocabulary of them indirectly.

The second reason which I prefer reading fiction is, compared the artifical scenes made by the director, the spectacles in the books can be more changeable and unrestrictive. Although, nowadays, the advantage of computer science and technology has made it possible to put some unrealistic place such as the ancient-battlefield of <<The Lord Of Ring>> in front of screen, these man-made stuffs still face a lot of problems and limits like money or time.

Furthermore, the rapid expansion of internet leads it is more economical and rational to download the fiction online for free, instead of spending a lot of money and time into the cinema.

Fiction is a very broad, and inclusive source of human’s imagination .Reading them is a good habit, a habit that will provide people not only relax but also knowledge , the one that should be an integral part of one’s entire life. Therefore, the conclusion I draw is  reading fiction is more enjoyable.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-8 11:20:01编辑过]

dutmcse

看那用词，高啊， 这种文章我得拿着字典才能写出来， 惭愧啊

marshial

我来学习，临摩这篇美文！

To spend time in the cinema or in the library is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly attractive qualities of watching movie, and neglect the genuinely advantage of reading fiction.

To spend time in the cinema or in the library is something like a dilemma to the public. The public always , confused by the seemingly attractive qualities of watching movies, forgets the genuine value of  reading books.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-7 21:16:42编辑过]

marshial

Under the remarks of the invention of movie, a revolution of entertainment, many cinemas are called into existence in our cities; meanwhile, people in increasing numbers have been pushed into the movie theaters these years. It is no doubt watching movie is an easy and comfortable way to share a story with the performers in front of the screen; however, some intrinsically confined characteristics such as: immobility, space and price are still exist.

With the coming of movie, many cinemas  loom up in our cities, providing more entertainment settings for the public. Then more and more numbers have been pushed into the theaters by the so-called attractiveness these years. There is no doubt/ accident that  by watching movies  the public can comfortably share a story with the performers . Some negative factors such as immobility ,space and price, however,still exist to impact people's interest of watching movies.

marshial

Maybe the books are so common for us that it seems a disastrous fact that fiction are now losing their appeal for many citizens. The first reason that I support reading fiction is it is obviously much easier to carry a book than a DVD by people. Reading fiction can take place anywhere and anytime, whether in a subway or in a plane, whether at the lunch break or at the midnight. For instance, subways or streetcars see many students whose homes are far from the place they are studying spending hours and hours on their way to school everyday. To read some fiction, share some exciting or sentimental experience with the protagonists in the fiction are able to not only making the time fly, but also extending the vocabulary of them indirectly.

Nowadays, books are so common for people to acquire that books seem to have lost the appeal to the public. Fistly , I support to read books because it is much easier to carry a book than a DVD when you need to kill your leisure time. Actually, reading a book can take place anywhere and anytime. You can reading when you take a subway; you can read when take a plane; and you can reading whenever you can. For instance , subway and streetcars always see young students reading books when they go to school. Reading some book ,you can share the sorrows and joys of  the characters in the books, not only killing the time but expanding your knowledge also.

marshial

The second reason which I prefer reading fiction is, compared the artifical scenes made by the director, the spectacles in the books can be more changeable and unrestrictive. Although, nowadays, the advantage of computer science and technology has made it possible to put some unrealistic place such as the ancient-battlefield of <<The Lord Of Ring>> in front of screen, these man-made stuffs still face a lot of problems and limits like money or time.

Secondly, I prefer reading books because in the book the spectacles , compared with the artifical scenes made by the director, are more changable and unrestrictive ,giving more space to appreciate the works. Although ,nowadays ,the development of computer science and technology has made it possible to creat some unrealistic places such as ancient battlefields of ' The Lord Ring' in the screen, these man-made stuffs still face many problems and restrictions like money or time.

这一段临摩起来相当难，不明白原作者这里的stuffs是不是settings?

marshial

Furthermore, the rapid expansion of internet leads it is more economical and rational to download the fiction online for free, instead of spending a lot of money and time into the cinema.

Besides, the rapid expansion of Internet leads to a more economical and reasonable way  to download  some interesting books freely , without spending much money and time into the cinema.

marshial

Fiction is a very broad, and inclusive source of human’s imagination .Reading them is a good habit, a habit that will provide people not only relax but also knowledge , the one that should be an integral part of one’s entire life. Therefore, the conclusion I draw is  reading fiction is more enjoyable.

Apparently, reading books is more valuable than watching movies in the cinema. Books are the well of humanity's knowledge and wisedom. Reading books not only  devours your tedious time but also culturate a fine hobby , a hobby that will provide you both relaxation and  knowledge . Reading books,therefore, should be an integral part of everyone's life.

总算搞完了，真累呀，楼主写得太好，使我临摩得欲罢不能，希望没有改变原意。

有一点遗憾，原作结构不够太好，感觉说理不够清晰、透彻。

我也是紧赶慢赶凑出来的，不全之处，欢迎坛子里的朋友指正！

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-7 19:35:17编辑过]

youngtic

等大家改完了，我把他背下来

dutmcse

这位更牛，改的比范文还好，读起来朗朗上口，欲罢不能啊。精彩