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likui

28. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoying doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the daily life, we sometimes do things that we dislike doing. I certainly support that it is necessary for us to insist on them. In the long run, the people who try them best to fulfill these things will be more progressive.

First, due to the limited society status and the need for all society members, to some extent, people cannot choice to do the things which will comfort them individually. In China, nowadays, there are a large number of workers who are from countries and swarm into the major metropolises to seek jobs to earn just little money. We image whether people really likes to plunge their precious life into the war. I believe most people prefer to enjoy their time along the beach with family rather than work hard or fight till death. But if they do not do such things, the children in the poor family will lose their education and the native land will be invaded.

Second, it might also be noted that what you enjoy never means that it is bad directly. By contrast papers，we go to a club because it can make me happy. However, we spend so much time playing that less time we can pay to study. Only doing what we like is not advisable. The classes we learn in the school all support us stress. We cannot ignore they are not only useful for the establishment of our thinking system but also the essential skills of our jobs in the future.

Admittedly, doing what you do not like is not excited. Nevertheless，I think the special experiences people get when they deal with troubles can shape their persevering characteristic. And we will be more preferable to do other things.

Depending on personal points above, we may reach the conclusion that doing what we do not enjoy is a part of life and in a long term we will benefit from it.

XDJM们开批！

snow_mountain

语法错误!!!  写完一定要自己先检查.  好几个句子都读不通. 不能给你一个个的批了, 最近有的忙. 但是, 之前提到的问题一定要注意.  因为在这篇文章中继续出现.

还有用词不准.  比如: The classes we learn in the school all support us stress. 你想说的意思是?

我认为准确比话多更重要.

怪了, 这个字体这么怎么大?

cocolly

哈哈。字数挺多的。

为什么老是要把一句好好的话，从中间喀嚓分开呢？

一定是受了毒害，认为一定要什么长短结合，呵呵。

enjoylife517

看来还是口语化的思维比较多，其实还是需要自己给自己改一改，如果写完就不想改的话，说明对作文没有信心或者没有兴趣，那就更要静下心来了。

kuikui加油！！

pengstone

我也来一篇同样题目的 大家接着批呀

We all are endowed with the right to decide what to do and what not to do, and it is an ideal condition that everybody gains the power of doing whatever we like to do. Unfortunately, however, no one, except the God in our imagines, possesses such power. Let us get down to fundamentals and agree that all of us are after all ordinary human beings----people who sometimes have to adjust their behaviors and thoughts to accommodate to circumstances.

It is common in our daily lives that people have to do what they do not enjoy doing mainly for their own personal needs or benefits. Here are some examples. An undergraduate student, although used to wearing jeans and sneakers, has to be dressed very formally when attending a job interview with a company. An unsociable employee, with the goal of winning an election campaign for senior manager, has to be involved in more social affairs and more intercommunication to obtain enough supports from colleagues. Even celebrities, as very well known as they are, are often confronted with such similar situations. Van Gogh the famous Dutch artist, for instance, has to sacrifice many his own beloved paintings for food, lodging and clothing to sustain his bare livelihood, when he was very poor.

In many other cases, people may force themselves to do something for interests of other persons or society. Despite the claim that human beings are innately self-centered, all of us are social creatures, the morality of which is far more consistent and far less conditional than that of other kinds of creatures. Human beings may, through sensitivity or reasoning, judge a situation objectively, even when that situation impinges on self-interest. In this respect, people sometimes constrain inner self-interest drives and, with the empathy with the needs of others, rationally do something that they do not enjoy doing. Here is an example to the point. A doctor, as usually honest as he is, has to tell a lie to a dying patient that he will recovery in the near future, for the fear of damaging the patient’s confidence and making his sickness more severely.

From what we have discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that although people want to act upon their own natural feelings and self-centered drives, people should sometimes do what they do not like to do, not only for the consideration of their own benefits but also for the good of others or society.

snow_mountain

我也来一篇同样题目的 大家接着批呀

We all are endowed with the right to decide what to do and what not to do, and it is an ideal condition that everybody gains the power of doing whatever we like to do. Unfortunately, however, no one, except the God in our imagines, possesses such power. Let us get down to fundamentals and agree that all of us are after all ordinary human beings----people who sometimes have to adjust their behaviors and thoughts to accommodate to circumstances.

It is common in our daily lives that people have to do what they do not enjoy doing mainly for their own personal needs or benefits. Here are some examples. An undergraduate student, although used to wearing jeans and sneakers, has to be dressed very formally when attending a job interview with a company. An unsociable employee, with the goal of winning an election campaign for senior manager, has to be involved in more social affairs and more intercommunication to obtain enough supports from colleagues. Even celebrities, as very well known as they are, are often confronted with such similar situations. Van Gogh the famous Dutch artist, for instance, has to sacrifice many his own beloved paintings for food, lodging and clothing to sustain his bare livelihood, when he was very poor.

In many other cases, people may force themselves to do something for interests of other persons or society. Despite the claim that human beings are innately self-centered, all of us are social creatures, the morality of which is far more consistent and far less conditional than that of other kinds of creatures. Human beings may, through sensitivity or reasoning, judge a situation objectively, even when that situation impinges on self-interest. In this respect, people sometimes constrain inner self-interest drives and, with the empathy with the needs of others, rationally do something that they do not enjoy doing. Here is an example to the point. A doctor, as usually honest as he is, has to tell a lie to a dying patient that he will recovery in the near future, for the fear of damaging the patient’s confidence and making his sickness more severely.

From what we have discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that although people want to act upon their own natural feelings and self-centered drives, people should sometimes do what they do not like to do, not only for the consideration of their own benefits but also for the good of others or society.

我来帮着改改字体.

enjoylife517

看花眼了，怎么经得起大家的轮番上阵啊，不敢批了。。。

enjoylife517

以下是引用bryony在2004-7-28 23:51:00的发言：

我也来一篇同样题目的 大家接着批呀

We all are endowed with the right to decide what to do and what not to do, and it is an ideal condition that everybody gains the power of doing whatever we like to do. Unfortunately, however, no one, except the God in our imagines, possesses such power. Let us get down to fundamentals and agree that all of us are after all ordinary human beings----people who sometimes have to adjust their behaviors and thoughts to accommodate to circumstances.

。。。。。

我来帮着改改字体.

静下心来一看，原来这个是“帮忙的”，哈哈

snow_mountain

我觉得这段可以改一下.

In this respect, people sometimes constrain inner self-interest drives and, with the empathy with the needs of others, rationally do something that they do not enjoy doing. Here is an example to the point. A doctor, as usually honest as he is, has to tell a lie to a dying patient that he will recovery in the near future, for the fear of damaging the patient’s confidence and making his sickness more severely.  (make  sth severe 吧. )

上面讲的是, 人们尽管有self interests, 但是还是会理智的做不愿做的事情.  下面得例子, 不是很贴切. 医生的撒谎, 虽然是show sympathy with the patients, 但是也不需要contrain inner self interests.   

总得来说, 写的很好.

enjoylife517

pengstone 的文章比较流畅，用词多变，结构完整。不错不错。

继续加油！