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坐稳:“On average, 9 out of every 1,000 passengers who traveled on Avia Airlines last year filed a complaint about our baggage-handling procedures. This means that although some 1 percent of your passengers were unhappy with those procedures, the overwhelming majority were quite satisfied with them; thus it would appear that a review of the procedures is not important to our goal of maintaining or increasing the number of Avia’s passengers.”
Discuss how well reasoned …etc. 我考了原题
[新东方写作示范]



主体段落： TIM



T: not average, in time and in space

I: every

M: average



TIM

Common sense informs us thataverage number may automatically conceal much of detailed information about real situation that, however, is not that averaged, and that the likely deviation might be existing both in time and in space.So if this Avia Airlines has 100 air lines with 1 linehaving received 100% complaint rate in baggage handling, then the on-average 1% unhappy passengers would be a case so big that must be addressed immediately.But the speaker might have been attempting to mislead us into believing that these unhappy passengers are uniformlydistributed in those 100 airlines and in this sense need not be paid unnecessary attention to.The article, to bolster this belief, puts in the first sentence a trivialized record – “On average, 9 out of 1,000 passengers … filed a complaint about our baggage-handling procedure.” Unfortunately, this ambiguousrecordcould merely serve to strengthen one possibility but has failed to rule out other possibilities mentioned above.


ISSUE:Organizations or business overemphasize the importance of team work, while strong individual often make things big. 大致意思是这样。 （题目我很确定）

输血：忘了。。。

月度：我是低分库，考了两篇法律，最后老眼昏花，直接不知所以然。。。。根据失败的经验，不要寄太多希望与月度机经，因为我一篇机经都没考到，我是把搜集基本看完了。所以同志们，好好打好基础吧