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1.开始重视字母大小写,减慢了速度。 2.开始注意逻辑的严密性,以防牛头不对马嘴。 3.开始注意每段开头的中心句。 4.依然觉得列提纲速度过慢,可能思维不够开阔,决定看《拯救新Gissue 》这本书拓展下,在看《newyorker》 5.依然打字速度过慢,龟爬。 ----------------------------- 字数:470+ 时间:不计 ------------------------------------- Issue 28
"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers,artists,or cientists, but thegeneral welfare of all its people." 提纲
提纲: 1.国民福利好则能力强,提高国家影响力,以芬兰为例 2.不尊重国民福利只知道官员利益的政府连好下场都没有,以清朝为例 3.精英厉害并不一定代表国家的厉害,以苏联解体为例
--------------------------------------------------------- Does the ultimate indicator of a great nation comes as the general welfare of its people or the achievements of it rulers ,artists,or scientist?though it seems attempting to agree that the achievements of the elites would considerably represent the greatness of the nation, I strongly agree that the general welfare of its people would be more challeging and valuable.
As we all know that mass people would be the master of the nation instead of the elites ,this opinion lies my first agreement with the speaker .The high general welfare of the mass would be useful incentive to motivate the nations the engine to creat a greater country.We may take finland for example.The great welfare in Finland have been impressed to the rest of the world ,which the government have covered "from the gradle to grave".as the people there have enjoyed a enviable , as well as pleasant life ,their creativity have been motivated.Finland have ranked among the most creative countries in the europe ,largely thanks to the talents of the mass ,the technology in Finland have received world wide respect,and we are all familiar with the company NOKIA.The greatness of the country have been shaped by the creativity of its people as well as the general welfare of its people.
My second point supporting the speaker's idea would be the lesson leant through Chinese history: the government which have ignored the general welfare of the people would be abandoned by the game,in other words,the general welfare of the mass would be the teststone of the greatness of the nation.We are all taught by history of China that the governers like the kings of Qing dynasty are busy enjoying the pleasure of their life as well as the game of power other than concerning the general welfare of its people, it's unquestioned that few hundreds late from its foundation, the dynasty have been overthrown by its radical democratics.
Thirdly,the achievements of the nation's elites do not necessarily mean the greatness of the nation.The reason would be self-evident that the money for improvement of the general welfare of the mass would be replace by other means by the elites, when the balance would be broken, the base of the nation would be destroyed.The collapse of the soviet would be the best example supporting this point.The success of the scientists in the soviet have left the American's behind in the aspect of astronomy especially.However,much to the balance of the nation on the science and welfare of its people have broken , the soviet have not been existed any more.
We believe what the Lincon have said :the nation is created of people , by people ,and for people,therefore The general welfare of the people would be the paramout factor determining the greatness of the nation compared by the achievements of the elites .
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