GWD Set 6 T2

chockolate

以下是引用nanalin在2004-8-19 4:16:00的发言：

proponents 主词 -> 是不能 by skimming along the top of the atmosphere的

这样的错误,OG选项里常出现哦..

A里也有这样的条式，为什么选A?

huyannancy

将前人总结的归纳了一下:

According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

 

A.    According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours. 正确，简洁的表达，by在这里正确的表手段，方式

B.    By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
        1.by skimming属于Dangling modifier，
        用来修饰后面的主语，之间应该有逻辑关系，但是proponents不能by skimming

C.    A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.  1.according to放在句子中间更好的表达意思; 2.with it skimming 不对，with短语表伴随

D.    A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
            1. say its proponents放在句子的中间不知道做什么成分，错误；2. Because of 表示因果关系，而这里需要by来表示手段，方式，而its skimming并不一定错，但one’s skimming 一定错

E.     According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
            1.改变了句子的重心，把重心从a proposed new style of aircraft转到了skimming along the top of the atmosphere; 2. Could和
            possible意思重复；3.its没有指代，与其指代的内容相隔太远；4.句中的it不能指代后面的整句话

注意：
            according to 不是dangling modifier,不存在修饰后面的主语，也不需要有什么逻辑意思

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欢迎指正

queenieli

謝謝樓上的總結，但是貌似對於e選項的第4點解釋有點問題，這裡it應該是形式賓語，是可以指代that從句的吧。。。

smartsky11

开始我也选E.其实对于E最最致命的错误在于 逻辑表达 有问题

skimming along the top of the atmosphere 为动作的发出者

makes it possible 动作

that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours. 为动作的接受者

逻辑上就不合理。这是OG中最常见的错误，

提醒XDJM在做题目的时候

第一遍思考是看结构。

第二遍思考是看逻辑。

不正之处，请指出

smartsky11

终极解释、

主语：.a proposed new style of aircraft

谓语 ：fly

所有修改的句子都要按照这个模式，即谓语是句子的重点不可以随便该成其他成分，当然是相对而言的，所有的句子都是比较出来

By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.这个错，是逻辑主语

A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its
                            proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere. （with的逻辑主语错）

A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.（插入语错）

According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.改变句子的动词结构

对比下来，A选项是没有错，那是对比其他几句而言。所有的改错都要建立在逻辑，对比，语法3者基础上。

不知道我这样的解释够？

smartsky11

终极解释、

主语：.a proposed new style of aircraft

谓语 ：fly

所有修改的句子都要按照这个模式，即谓语是句子的重点不可以随便该成其他成分，当然是相对而言的，所有的句子都是比较出来

By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.这个错，是逻辑主语

A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its
                            proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere. （with的逻辑主语错）

A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.（插入语错）

According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.改变句子的动词结构

对比下来，A选项是没有错，那是对比其他几句而言。所有的改错都要建立在逻辑，对比，语法3者基础上。

不知道我这样的解释够？

yiyi4141

D错在哪里啊？请各位牛牛指教！

Journal

不明白为什么不行 with it skimming...<D选项>

不是独立主格都是with + n. + adj/v+ing 

Xclann

以下是引用roric在2006/8/22 11:56:00的发言：

1. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

只记得OG中关于A of B ，AB都有被修饰和被指代的可能；联想到这道题，明显是aircraft作了主语，是AB都可以做主语呢还是只有B可以做主语？

it is confusing!! 

could style FLY?

who have the original text?

Xclann

By skipping along the top of the atmosphere like a rock skittering across a pond, a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in only 2 hours, its proponents say.

http://www.sciencenews.org/pages/sn_arc98/9_19_98/fob5.htm