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[求助]麻烦大家继续来看TWE新增第185_按照185的顺序128/146/175/185

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41#
发表于 2004-7-18 11:58:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-7-18 11:48:00的发言:

乍一看, 偶已经死了....


第二看, 词汇实在是太标准


偶断然写不到


什么什么supplemental watering.....


photosynthesis


....


小声说一点: 据说ETS不喜欢, firstly...second...third...可以考虑换换


所以偶每次都是


to begin with


next


in addtion


....






唉, 考G的时候学来.  先卖的.


收到. 立马改, to begin with, moreover, in addition, finally/ last but not least ...........


谢谢MM提醒.

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-18 12:10:00 | 只看该作者

last but not least ...........

也别用了, 实在是.....

43#
发表于 2004-7-18 19:42:00 | 只看该作者
pick you up on that.
44#
发表于 2004-7-18 21:34:00 | 只看该作者

今天很想表达水涨船高这个概念. 可惜找不到经典的表达法. 只好作罢.  

差了一下字典居然是: when the river rises the boat goes up too.  虾米呀.

MM有没看过什么比较好的表达? 我要意译的那种.

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-19 05:23:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用bryony在2004-7-18 21:34:00的发言:

今天很想表达水涨船高这个概念. 可惜找不到经典的表达法. 只好作罢.  


差了一下字典居然是: when the river rises the boat goes up too.  虾米呀.


MM有没看过什么比较好的表达? 我要意译的那种.



这个表达很好啊


明白简单哦


让偶想想

46#
发表于 2004-7-19 10:01:00 | 只看该作者
唉, 你觉得我的作文里面会真的牵涉到船呀水的嘛?
47#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-19 11:28:00 | 只看该作者

就说:

with the soaring ......, ......... is inflating/ increasing/ gaining strength...

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-19 11:36:00 | 只看该作者

这一片一定帮偶看看: 特别是从观点表达上, 这样两边各个50%的方法可以不可以.


PS, 偶写了两遍的就是这个.


184. Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



In the daily life, people are continuously facing many questions, analysis of which will assist them to make wise choice. One of such intriguing problems is whether to study alone or study with a group of students.  Both of the two ways of studying have advantages and disadvantages. For me as well as for many students, to employ the suitable studying method for different occasions will render the best result.



To begin with, studying alone will help students to concentrate on what he is reading or analyzing without any disruptions. Scientific research buttress the conclusion that concentration is necessary to memorize the content effectively. People usually are not able to remember anything when absent-minded. The capability of focusing on specific subject without distraction need to be fostered during the process of learning. Future job may demand the worker to deal with urgent situation independently. For example a doctor must put forward correct plan to save a patient in an emergency. The doctor cannot discuss with his colleagues due to the time limit.  In this aspect, such ability to solve problems individually must be trained during study.



Next, to study with a group is of enormous value for a student to cultivate the team spirit. The complexity of the science and technology accounts for the necessity of teamwork. In the ancient time, many scientists solved enchanting problems independently. However since the Industrial Revolution, human beings have invented and used numerous innovative machines, such as the sewing machine or even the computer. The projects are becoming increasingly complicated, leaving impossible for a single person to even think about them. The tremendous amount of information overwhelms human beings nowadays. From this point, to work with other people in a group, to strive for a project together and to share the job responsibility have become a basic part during study.



IN addition, to communicate with other student will be rewarding not only academically but also emotionally. Human beings differ from other creatures because of social connections. Students must be able to exchange ideas and knowledge with others for better understanding of life. For example, in a group to finish an assignment of how to improve the environment on campus, students need to accumulate information from different libraries for reference. It is virtually practical for them to split the job and discuss later. Everyone will offer his collected information, bravely speaking in front of group members. Such experience will be of great significance to prepare future career.



To sum up, both to study alone and with a group are substantial for a student to cope with the changing society. To succeed in the arena, he must both be able to study proficiently without interruption and to share his ideas with others. An isolated student cannot accomplish or fulfill, yet one without individuality cannot achieve. Every student should learn to balance the two ways of study and allocate time and energy.   


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49#
发表于 2004-7-19 13:22:00 | 只看该作者

可以呀.

8过, 50%的结构好像一般用on the one hand, on the other hand.  至少你这个第二段应该改成however, 不是next 吧.

第三段的中心有点散. 偶以为你会阐述emotionally 和social connection 呢. 你肯定是写的太急了. 这篇字数多少呀?

BTW, 这个soaring 8错.  偶怎么没想到

看到这篇我立刻联想到我们的梦之队* 月.  哈哈.

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-19 15:55:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用bryony在2004-7-19 13:22:00的发言:

可以呀.


8过, 50%的结构好像一般用on the one hand, on the other hand.  至少你这个第二段应该改成however, 不是next 吧.


第三段的中心有点散. 偶以为你会阐述emotionally 和social connection 呢. 你肯定是写的太急了. 这篇字数多少呀?


BTW, 这个soaring 8错.  偶怎么没想到



看到这篇我立刻联想到我们的梦之队* 月.  哈哈.


哈哈哈, 8错8错, 梦之队

好啊

你说的特别对. 偶从前没怎么写过50%的中立观点. 学习学习.

8是写急了, 是写气了.....


差不多有470了.等于连着写了两遍....


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