【每日阅读训练——速度越障5系列】【5-17】

ccmoom

越障07：15
为什么我用英语就什么都写不出来了呢？？？？
求指导~

很邻家

其实我也是（中文我好像同样写不出来.........），但是逼着自己写,我的越障总是读得稀里糊涂的，什么逻辑结构都读不出来，很难过啊

bananazoo

今天学校一堆东西要填，来晚啦~糊糊，bana来做作业了~

bananazoo

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寝室叫我睡啦~
糊糊，明天补越障~

fox0923

没事儿，我也是昨天没完成作业来补的。大家都是很忙啊~~

fox0923

to CC和邻家：可以先试着用中文将逻辑框架勾勒出来，然后用英文练笔，当是写AA，反正都是用自己的话写出来的。刚开始也不熟练，不过后来注意了文中的用句，所以到后面写越障时有时会引用它的句型结构。但是还是要注意平时的多读多练，而不是机械性的记忆，变不成自己的东西还是写不出来的。

很邻家

谢谢糊糊~~看来强悍的英语水平还是前提呀

bananazoo

我来补越障~
慢了点~7'55
1 The bad condition in TEPCO.
  Those because the earthquake and tsunami taken place in Japan. many nuclear power station have to closed down.
  TEPCO try to use water to cool the nuclear reactor, but they failed and even lost trust.
  And the failure do damange the reactor.
2 After these, Japan face a lack of energy, and every individuals try to save energy in their own way.
  But the problem still far from resolved. Janpan need to freeze the nuclear reactor for one year, and these will cost the GDP fall and a lots jobs lost.
3 Janpan need to robust their energy industry.
  In Japan, 97% of energy was controled by monopolies, but they don't support the government. The price of electricity is till high.
 TEPCO has a huge influence.
4 Janpa' energy usage structure need to reform. They need to reduce their dependence on the nuclear power.
  someone think build a solar-power is a good idea, but they still face many problem~
(make some notes...)

ccmoom

to CC和邻家：可以先试着用中文将逻辑框架勾勒出来，然后用英文练笔，当是写AA，反正都是用自己的话写出来的。刚开始也不熟练，不过后来注意了文中的用句，所以到后面写越障时有时会引用它的句型结构。但是还是要注意平时的多读多练，而不是机械性的记忆，变不成自己的东西还是写不出来的。

-- by 会员 fox0923 (2011/9/21 1:13:05)

恩，我觉得先用中文回忆，再用英文写出来，应该可以~  先试段时间再说吧。
 大概是阅读还可以，但是写作确实不行。呵呵~ 谢谢fox~··

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