一题JJ语法

dadadaxia

assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee是Daniel Inouye 的posts,
including assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee修饰posts
再看看下面帖子中分词的用法
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/627/02/

dxiaocai

感觉 including会有作伴随状语修饰杂志的歧义

FIGHTING618

顶上去

yoonbong0908

LZ的那个题，感觉INCLUDE是修饰TERMINATIONS才对。。但是，逗号ING的话，就是修饰杂志了！！！我觉得。。。

ddswendy

应该是including，如下例，这里没什么歧义的，大家都知道后面讲的是国家，不存在杂志名叫：日本、泰国这样的歧义。
A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population,  (which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing)   state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.

A. which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B. which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C. which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D. including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E. including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of

答案 [D]

larrylw

dadadaxia提供的网址很给力。已收藏，表示感谢无私奉献。

superfans124

A present participle (-Ingform) at the beginning of a sentence is often made to be dangling.
Although these forms are technically Verb Modifiers (more on these shortly), they still need
a noun subject that makes sense.
Wrong: Using thg latest technology. the prpblem was identified.
. Wrong: The problem was identified, using the latest tgchnplogy
Errors such as these are common in speech. The modifier using the latest technology needs to
refer to someone who actually used the technology. To correct this issue, we insert a reasonable
noun as the subject of using.
Right: Using the latest technology, the engineer identified the problem.
Notice that you can move the using phrase to the end of the sentence.
Right: The engineer identified the problem, using the latest technology.
Unlike a noun modifier, a verb modifier does not have to touch the subject. However,
the subject must make sense with the verb modifier used in this way. We will cover verb
modifiers in more detail later in this chapter.

larrylw

好像又回到了主谓一致之类的大语法了。

绿阳Eva

大家别被误导了，在gmat中 ，including做介词，不是分词！！！

小鱼儿的梦想

United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term,that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.    that included
B.    which includes
C.    including
D.    some of which were
E.    among them being
选C。
JJ这个题需要讨论！

-- by 会员 syp84825 (2011/8/31 21:15:21)

个人觉得:
A, that前加逗号不对,
B. Which通常紧跟修饰的名词,变成了first term 去include了,不对
C.分词表伴随状态,结果, 况且和Which从句比,分词更简洁;
D.不简洁
E. Being用在这里不合适, 只在表将来被动时用可以.
也不知道这样分析对不对，大牛指正！