superbat呼叫斑主！OG Q105 关于代词、ing结构能否修饰介宾中的宾语

jj0615

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superbat28

谢谢superbat，但是我仍然有两个问题：
对于A选项中OG的解释
A the participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase; use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.
黄色部分的字体应该理解，为什么说进行时（coordinating）打乱时间顺序，coordinate和capitalize不是同时发生的？
另外，对于E选项中OG的解释，
Ethe participial phrase does not clearly modify book illustrations; the relationships among the parts of the sentence are unclear.
这里不是讲coordinate与capitalize用and作并列了吗，为什么OG上还说没有清晰地修饰illustration？E为什么不可以选？
谢谢！

-- by 会员 jj0615 (2011/10/7 12:17:03)

哎，日子过混乱了。我给你发个附件，考的时候和抓抓同学讨论时候写的的。你先看看哈~

gato

来学习了。。。。。

gato

支持！

ericwilliam

受教了

crack25

过来，总结一下：
先引述RON得
1) when you use a COMMA -ING modifier after a clause**, you should actually satisfy TWO requirements:
-- the modifier should modify the action of the preceding clause, as you have stated;
AND
-- the subject of the preceding clause should also make sense as the agent of the -ING action.

examples:
Joe broke the window, angering his father. --> this sentence makes sense, because it correctly implies that joe "angered his father".
the window was broken by Joe, angering his father. --> this sentence doesn't make sense, because it implies that the window (i.e., not joe himself) angered joe's father.

my brother tricked me, disappointing Dad --> implies that dad is disappointed in my brother for tricking me (and not necessarily disappointed in me for being tricked).
i was tricked by my brother, disappointing Dad --> implies that dad is disappointed in me because i fell for my brother's trick (and not that he's disappointed in my brother for tricking me).

再重复一下
COMMA+ VERBING
1) LOOK AT THE SUBJECT. IF IT IS NOT LOGIC-- PASS~
2) LOOK AT rON'S WORDS. i F IT CAN NOT FIT EITHER (1) OR(2),WILL PASS~

PS: COMMA+VERBED
DEFINITELY, DIRECTLY, IMMEDIATELING MODIFY THE NOUN. hahaha,! if it is not logic, well pass it

wtx2490467

好贴,

xyc19901015

看了这么多，我只有一个问题:carefully coordinating 到底是作状语还是定语啊？OG上一直在说modifiy the noun（即作定语），但是我怎么觉得这是状语啊？superbat同志，你说呢？

ella13

这里的名词只有两个BP 和illustrations ,所以代词的指代如果没错不会有语义的混乱。所以这里的them 是对的指代illustrations.

wbhsky

MARK!