Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources。
B、based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
关于based前的逗号,我觉得本来是应该去掉直接跟在society后面做修饰的,这也是为什么没有which is的原因;但是因为后面的列举超过两个出现两个逗号,假如based前不加逗号的话,就变成:
Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of other wild and domestic resources。
这样子是不是更加难以看清楚句子的逻辑结构了,所以为了把列举部分明确表示在一起,并且适当断句,就在based前加上一个逗号。 |