Minivans carry as many as seven passengers AND, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
咳,对不起,偶又有点急了,大家为什么把这题看得这么复杂!
原题即A选项,大家这样看,以AND为界,前后两句话: 1. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers.
2. compared with most sport utility vehicles, (Minivans) cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A并不正确,compared with most sport utility vehicles 是插入语正确,比较的是Minivans和most sport utility vehicles;A变成了比较Minivans 载客人的数量和most sport utility vehicles比较,后面又说cost less....,存在着严重的逻辑问题。
先看个例句吧:
The average working week in Japan is 42.3 hours, compared with 41.6 in the UK,so they are not too badly off.
A将carry变成谓语,变成了宾语载客人的数量与其他交通工具的比较,逻辑不通。
这里的carry部分只能用作定语修饰主语Minivans ,然后插入语compared with most sport utility vehicles,说明是Minivans和most sport utility vehicles比较。纵观5个选项,只用D符合要求没有其它语法错误。
Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
這是原句,但就是因為那個 and(Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and,)造成後面的平衡出現文法上的錯誤
Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
D. Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
A中没有突出重点(说车的比较优势),carry as many as seven passengers and反而突出了不可比、不想比的一个特点。从意思上讲,D优。偶觉得这种复杂插入语在杨鹏难句里比比皆是啊。这个结构很好。