摆脱牛人们给作文指点下迷津啊。

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题目是学校是不是应该在体育和社会活动上花一样多的钱，和教育相比。感觉写起来很没内容感，无法深入没有深度啊，让牛人们见笑了。。。
In this era of competition, people are becoming more and more focused on the certifications and diplomas of key universities. Thus, some of the people maintain the viewpoint that schools and universities should give most of its financial support to classes and libraries in order to enhance the quality of education. I concede their ideas. But from my perspective, the schools should pay equal attention to the sports and social activities as well.


Though it can be denied that a school's responsibility is to train their students and guide them into an accurate way of study. But in the meantime, we should take a step back and think more and more carefully. We should know health is always the first that ought to be considered. For instance, some students in my class are really intelligent and always do well in every subject. But they are more likely to fall ill because of the lack of exercises and sports. If so, I think it is meaningless for these students to work so hard. Because they will never know the happiness when playing sports. And it is a pity that some of schools ignore the healthy problem and only concentrate on the education work.


Furthermore, I think social activities are also vital for students because through these events, students can broad their horizons and learn something crucial which they are not supposed to learn in their books. It is also an opportunity for students to experience social life before they actually enter the society. They can accumulate more working and interpersonal experience for future use. They will benefit a lot from this process and after they begin social life, they will feel more confident and comfortable. And also they will feel easier to deal with different obstacles and feel privileged.


From all the evidence mentioned above comes to a natural conclusion that all the schools should put equal attentions to classes and libraries as well as the sports and social activities. It is obvious that every educator should think the balance between the education work and extracurricular activities.

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来个人说说啊。。。。