A. 逻辑上来说,不是the owner and editor was published,而是the Messenger was published;
B. 逻辑上来说,不是two young journalists were published,而是the Messenger was published;
D. and published……离the Messenger太远,不能很好地修饰the messenger;
E. 主从句颠倒.
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主谓搭配;
continue本身已经表示正在进行;
不应有的平行结构;
into the coming months没有in the coming months好
A. 主谓搭配;
into the coming months没有in the coming months好
but that里的that多余;
B. 主谓搭配;
C. but that里的that多余;
D. but that里的that多余;
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简洁;
没有多余的代词.
简洁;
没有多余的代词they;
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主语太长,倒装(还原后为The better use of the new technology to revitalize, in better sound than was ever before possible, some of the classic recorded performances of the pre-LP era has been the development of the compact disc.)
A. was 和has been时态不符;
B. was 和has been时态不符;
developing和the use不对称;
D. none the less……than错误;
E. no……less as错误.
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A. skills和disinclination 不适合作比较;
B. skills 和many people 不适合作比较;
C. skills bring about a disinclination语意上不通;
they指代不清;
are weak to a degree改变了原意;
E. while willing to admit their lack……省略了many people have,而many people have willing to admit their lack语法上说不通.
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A. were destroyed and heavily damaged逻辑上不通;
逻辑上说, be constructed的动作应该发生在be destroyed or heavily damaged 之前;
C. were destroyed and heavily damaged逻辑上不通;
have been时态不对,应该为过去完成时;
D. have been时态不对,应该为过去完成时;
the earthquake发生在last year,而不是some buildings occurred发生在last year.