OG241-Besides/As well as在句首的修饰对象问题

hpp920

我顶, 请高手指教!

bloodcherry

我晕,先把题目贴全了

1.Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
（A）Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last Ju1y，the railroad employee are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits．

（B）Added to increase in hour1y wages which had been requested last July，the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
（C）The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.
（D）In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees retirement benefits.

（E）In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

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三脚猫

建议仔细看一下第二页leeon的帖子。

carina

以下是引用Tiangel在2004-8-15 17:20:00的发言：
E中的as well是不是有些多余？只要not only --but(also)就够了吧？

同问？

TakeItEasy1

1。as well as绝对不能在句首

对于这一点有定论了吗？

yangsh

NOT NN,

"IN ADDITION TO" MODIFIES THE "S+V", BUT THIS PHRASE DOES NOT  MODIFIY ONLY THE SUBJECT, REQUIRING THE PARALLELISM BETWEEN THE SUBJECT AND THE OBJECT AFTER "IN ADDITION TO".

TO BE DISCUSSED..

vedder

本题的正确答案能不能算做改变句意呢？

本来是从属结构的heat and light好象变成了主句结构，应该算错吧？

vedder

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juliet01192000

241. As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the solar wind.

(A)  As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream

(B)  Besides heat and light, also the Sun is the source of a continuous stream

(C)  Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming

(D)  The Sun is the source not only of heat and light, but also of a continuous stream

(E)  The Sun is the source of not only heat and light but, as well, of a continuous streaming

Choice D, the best answer, has no modification errors and uses parallel phrases to complete the idiomatic construction not only ... but also. Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do. This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar wind. Choice B may be faulted for the awkward word order of also the Sun, while C unnecessarily uses streaming rather than the more straightforward stream. Choice E fails to use parallel phrases in the idiomatic construction not only x ... but [also] y: of should not appear before not only if it appears after but, and but also is preferable to but. Finally, the use of the gerund streaming rather than the more straightfor­ward noun stream is needlessly awkward.

下面问题同问，请nn解答，谢谢！

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本来准备接受besides 放句首要和主语对应的原则, 现在看见补充题1又糊涂了 og

241题: Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming of atomic particles known as the solar wind.                                                                错误.

补充题1: In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.             正确
Besides和in addition to 有什么本质的不同? in addition to 放句首为什么不需要和主语对应?糊涂了我, 帮忙呀, 各位!!!

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以下是引用Tiangel在2004-8-15 17:20:00的发言： E中的as well是不是有些多余？只要not only --but(also)就够了吧？

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as well as绝对不能在句首

对于这一点有定论了吗？

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-3-24 19:29:25编辑过]

juliet01192000

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