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原来中介都是默认不写optional essay的啊~晕死!

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21#
发表于 2010-12-12 20:05:19 | 只看该作者
弱问一句。。我是DIY菜鸟。。
optional essay是不是就是指 "you may provide supplemental information regarding ........"这种啊。。我申的一个学校里就有介个。。
22#
发表于 2010-12-13 00:09:19 | 只看该作者
optional essay本来就不用写
optional essay只是说明为什么你GPA低 或者其他分数很低的原因
GPA上了三都没必要写 写多了反倒不好。。。。
你们不懂就别抱怨了
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 16:28:32)







看来您很懂嘛
-- by 会员 夏舞葵影 (2010/12/12 16:33:16)





我擦 你不懂你叫个毛啊
好吧 既然你们都不懂 我就把写Optional Essay的tips转到这里
有很多东西不明白的时候要懂得自己去寻找答案 姐可没空跟你耍嘴皮子 OK?
给所有DIY还有找中介的同志们参考一下吧
希望对你们有帮助!


HOWTO WRITE THE OPTIONALESSAY
Okay gang, much hasbeen written about  the OptionalEssay.  And today, we willcontribute to that pool of knowledge.  But we will as always do itcleverly, briskly, and not without our special brand of PE humour.  

Behold: the first ever Guide to the OptionalEssay.

1) Speak to the facts.  As we all have heard countless times,the key to the OptionalEssay is to explain WHY you bombed the GMAT.  Whyyou did so badly at college.  The adcom already knows THAT you did--sohere you can tell them a story.  I did A badly in college, but the reasonsare B and C.  Since then, Ive done D and E.  See that?  Noproblems here.  Just the facts, gang.  No long-winded, circularstories.

2) Dont write unless you have to.*  As most of us know, this is NOTa chance to slip in a new essay for the adcom's viewing pleasure. "Well I havent written about community service yet, so..." Nope.  Bad idea--this will force the adcom to question your judgment. Now that being said, there are two exceptions to this rule--Johnson andCBS.  Those apps are so frickin short, we DO recommend perhaps writing anadditional short essay.  But these two are the ONLY exceptions we areaware of.  

3) Speak with Confidence.  This is the only one that seems to trippeople up.  The last thing that an adcom wants to read is another whinyexplanation as to why you blew the GMAT.  After youve written your firstsentence, they KNOW where the essay is going.  We HATE to spend all 500 wordson this essay if we can help it--get in there, make your point, and getout.  If you are not sorry, if you dont apologize--that is perfectlyFINE.  All you need is some clear logic--make the point, and get out ofthere.  Speak with confidence, and dont dwell.  This should be theshortest essay that you write.  eriod.

Hope this helps gang.

Jon Frank

HBS 2005
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 17:01:27)




我是说您很懂 我不懂啊  没想到您老火气如此之大
23#
发表于 2010-12-13 00:36:53 | 只看该作者
optional essay本来就不用写
optional essay只是说明为什么你GPA低 或者其他分数很低的原因
GPA上了三都没必要写 写多了反倒不好。。。。
你们不懂就别抱怨了
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 16:28:32)








看来您很懂嘛
-- by 会员 夏舞葵影 (2010/12/12 16:33:16)






我擦 你不懂你叫个毛啊
好吧 既然你们都不懂 我就把写Optional Essay的tips转到这里
有很多东西不明白的时候要懂得自己去寻找答案 姐可没空跟你耍嘴皮子 OK?
给所有DIY还有找中介的同志们参考一下吧
希望对你们有帮助!


HOWTO WRITE THE OPTIONALESSAY
Okay gang, much hasbeen written about  the OptionalEssay.  And today, we willcontribute to that pool of knowledge.  But we will as always do itcleverly, briskly, and not without our special brand of PE humour.  

Behold: the first ever Guide to the OptionalEssay.

1) Speak to the facts.  As we all have heard countless times,the key to the OptionalEssay is to explain WHY you bombed the GMAT.  Whyyou did so badly at college.  The adcom already knows THAT you did--sohere you can tell them a story.  I did A badly in college, but the reasonsare B and C.  Since then, Ive done D and E.  See that?  Noproblems here.  Just the facts, gang.  No long-winded, circularstories.

2) Dont write unless you have to.*  As most of us know, this is NOTa chance to slip in a new essay for the adcom's viewing pleasure. "Well I havent written about community service yet, so..." Nope.  Bad idea--this will force the adcom to question your judgment. Now that being said, there are two exceptions to this rule--Johnson andCBS.  Those apps are so frickin short, we DO recommend perhaps writing anadditional short essay.  But these two are the ONLY exceptions we areaware of.  

3) Speak with Confidence.  This is the only one that seems to trippeople up.  The last thing that an adcom wants to read is another whinyexplanation as to why you blew the GMAT.  After youve written your firstsentence, they KNOW where the essay is going.  We HATE to spend all 500 wordson this essay if we can help it--get in there, make your point, and getout.  If you are not sorry, if you dont apologize--that is perfectlyFINE.  All you need is some clear logic--make the point, and get out ofthere.  Speak with confidence, and dont dwell.  This should be theshortest essay that you write.  eriod.

Hope this helps gang.

Jon Frank

HBS 2005
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 17:01:27)





我是说您很懂 我不懂啊  没想到您老火气如此之大
-- by 会员 夏舞葵影 (2010/12/13 0:09:19)

OK OK MY BAD! Very very Sorry!!!!!!
既往不咎 既往不咎 您大人不记小人过哈!
24#
发表于 2010-12-13 00:40:23 | 只看该作者
感觉这个跟MBA的optional essay还是有点不一样的。。。
有的是让解释弱项的。。有的就直接问的是你还有什么想跟admission说的没。。。
后者我觉得如果有话说可以写啊。。。。。。没的说就不写呗。。。。
25#
发表于 2010-12-13 00:48:22 | 只看该作者
感觉这个跟MBA的optional essay还是有点不一样的。。。
有的是让解释弱项的。。有的就直接问的是你还有什么想跟admission说的没。。。
后者我觉得如果有话说可以写啊。。。。。。没的说就不写呗。。。。
-- by 会员 越影 (2010/12/13 0:40:23)



恩 想法是一样的  还是应该认真看每个学校optional essay的要求
26#
发表于 2010-12-13 01:02:31 | 只看该作者
Is there any further informaton we should consider in assessing your candidacy?...


就这句话来说。。。我没看出是要解释GPA啊。。。

其实我一直好奇GPA怎么解释啊。。。难道真的说什么生病什么的吗?如果真不是什么家里出大问题或者急事。。越解释越惨吧。。
27#
发表于 2010-12-13 01:04:36 | 只看该作者
Is there any further informaton we should consider in assessing your candidacy?...


就这句话来说。。。我没看出是要解释GPA啊。。。

其实我一直好奇GPA怎么解释啊。。。难道真的说什么生病什么的吗?如果真不是什么家里出大问题或者急事。。越解释越惨吧。。
-- by 会员 蒙太奇 (2010/12/13 1:02:31)



恩一般让解释的那种都最好不解释吧。。感觉是make excuse。。。反而不好~~
28#
发表于 2010-12-13 01:09:21 | 只看该作者
Is it relevant?
Perhaps this goes without saying, but the only information worth sharing in an optional essay is that which will make a material difference in your candidacy. Whether you wish to comment on an exciting leadership role you’ve just taken on or explain that you were overextended extracurricularly during that one bad semester in college, make sure to think carefully about whether this information will affect and enhance the reader’s perception of your business school candidacy.

这是我GOOGLE来的。。我感觉每个学校不一样。。如果它问你为什么分数烂你就只能解释分数。。。如果它问你EXTRA THING。。。。你就可以写些你认为RELEVANT的。。。。我觉得写这个是有好处的。。。
29#
发表于 2010-12-13 01:22:50 | 只看该作者
这个东西对于大多数人来说没必要写 但是如果背景有比较特别或者比较模糊的地方 又没法在ESSAY里展开的

那就得写
30#
发表于 2010-12-13 09:27:53 | 只看该作者
弱问一句。。我是DIY菜鸟。。
optional essay是不是就是指 "you may provide supplemental information regarding ........"这种啊。。我申的一个学校里就有介个。。
-- by 会员 meredith821 (2010/12/12 20:05:19)


谁给帮俺判断一下。。"you may provide supplemental information regarding your academic performance or professional experience"这种到底是补充讲学术表现什么,还是让解释短板。。。
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