求修改Being creative，rather than planning carefully，will come up with best solution

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People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds display sheer dissimilar opinions to the statement that being creative will come up with the best solution to a problem rather than planning carefully. Some people maintain that being creative can help us find a shortcut to a problem and only being creative can we fix a problem perfectly. In taking various factors into consideration, however, I side on the opposite and reckon that it is presumptuous to say that being creative will come up with the best solution to a problem.
       At the threshold matter, I concede that being creative is very significant for us in solving a problem by using the most effective and best way. There is no doubt that being creative would  bring  many benefits in find a solution to a problem. As we all know, imagination is more important than knowledge and being creative can bring us imagination. So being creative will sometimes provide us with a solution in an innovative way. Generally, such innovative solutions can have the highest efficiency. For example, Albert Einstein kept being so creative during his youth that he could come up the best solutions to several famous difficult physical problems which no other physician could figure out and finally he won the Noble Prize.
       Turning to my second point about this statement, planning carefully also plays a significant role in helping us figure out the best solution. Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution. Things are featured with a mixture of elements so the more we investigate a problem, the more easily we can come up with a best solution. And planning carefully can make a great contribution to the investigation of a problem. Thus we can analysis the problem fully and thoroughly. For example, when I face a problem, I would rather to analysis it then plan it carefully. Thus, the key point to the solving of the problem will be obvious and I will fix the problem step by step. Planning carefully can save me lot of time and provide me with the most effective solution.
       Finally, some other factors such as accumulation of knowledge and life experience may be deemed more significant by virtue of the roles they play in finding the best solution of a problem. For example, a child who is very creative but has little accumulation of knowledge usually cannot come up any effective solution of a practical problem because he is too young and only being creative is impracticable. Being creative without accumulation of knowledge can make no sense in any case.
       To sum up, in weighing up both in weigh up both the prospect benefits and potential risks, I do strongly believe that it is quite presumptuous to say that being creative, rather than the planning carefully, will come up the best solution of a problem. The best solution of a problem is apparently a very simple concept, but the simplicity of it belies its significance. The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, but the eventual pay-off could well be worth the effort.