第一次写居然写了一天（600+words），泪奔求指导

Kaye

别人都说口语难，可是我觉得writing难多了呀，毕竟speaking考的是反应writing考的是深度和内涵（个人看法，我觉得自己很没有内涵哈~）
so第一次写就写了一天，还超字数了。。。相当无语。。。我10月末就要考了，怎么办呀呀呀？？？
这是TPO1的writing,求拍砖！Agree or disagree?At unis and colleges,sports and social activities are as just important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

The question of whether sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support is one that has concerned many people.It's held by some people that budgeting sports and social activties benifits students and does good to their future.Meanwhile, there is an equally good arguement that the focus of universities and colleges is supposed to be academic activities.From my point of view, classes and libraries play an more crucial role in unversities and colleges, therefore they ought to obtain more financial support rather than an amount that is equal to sports and social activities.The following discussion will substantiate my view.
The main reason for my prospensity is that universities and colleges are concerned with creating and spreading knowledge,not exercing body or offering social activities.Majority of students go to university in order to pursue further education.Consequently, classes provide students with not only the direct way to acquire knowledge but also opportunities to exchange views and opinions with professors.On the other hand, libraries which keep the treasures of knowledge in the past and the books stored in them virtually cover all subjects are definitely the best place to attain some acqusition.A case in point is Harvard University.Well-known for its excellent resources on class, it is so popular that attract outstanding students from all over the world.Another good example is Peking University of which library owns most books in China.Since students are always exposed to books, they tend to absorb more knowledge unconsciously and make some academic achievements.Briefly speaking, classes and libraries are the main part of universities and colleges while sports and social activities are merely additon to them.
furthermore, sports and social activities shouldn't receive the same amount of financial support considering that they are not so important as classes and libraries.As the budget of school is limited, auhtority ought to use it efficiently.Suppose the school is wealthy, the authority can increase the input of money of sports and social activities.However,when the financial status of the school is not so satisfying, it's undoubtedly that the authority must focus its budget into classes and libraries to ensure the quality of education.As a matter of fact, sports and social activities do not cost much money as we thought and it is a waste to spend too much on them.Neverthess,improving the quality of classes and developing the libraries require a substantial amount of money such as the salary of sophisticated professors and the cost of up-to-date books.My school spend a huge amount of money building a stadium despite thelack of new readings, resulting in students' complaints and criticism by the public.On the whole,by no means should sports and social activities receive the  financial support equal to classes and libraries.
Admittedly,sports and social activities also play an important part in universities and collges.For one thing, they add more vividness to students' campus life.Through doing sports and participating in all kinds of activities,students can not only relax their mind but gain some social experience,which let them know how to balance a complicated situation.For another, excellent performance in sports and social activities contribute to the school's image.For instance, the basket match among universities held in the states every year arrest people's attention and even President Obama watched that!The champion, University of North Carolina Chapter Hill is thought highly of partly because its outstanding performance in basketball.However,what we should aware is that the top priority of universities and colleges is not to relax people or to improve the image of the school but to educate.
On no account can we ignore the importance of sports and social activities at school and colleges.However, the weight of classes and libraries far overwhelm that of sports and social activities.Accordingly, it is impossible for sports and social activities to get the same financial support equally.I recommend that the authority should make clear of the priority and make its budget in detail so as to ensure the qualification of education meanwhile enrich students' campus life.

九斤

楼主好强  我是十月中旬考 不过你的水平比我高 你的作文头两句就把我绕进去了  看不明白

antigonechen

考试时候怎么可能打这么多
我看鸟一本书，说不要写太长的句子，因为改卷人会丧失耐心……
同等牛人前来。
顺便一问 为神马我上传头像就死机捏