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[Essay] Kellogg essay 2 求教

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发表于 2010-9-23 23:08:15 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Describe your key leadership experiences and evaluate what leadership areas you hope to develop through your MBA experiences (600 word limit).

这道题是什么意思?是要写两三个领导经历吗?然后后面半句是什么意思啊

发表于 2010-9-23 23:40:51 | 显示全部楼层
1. 我认为几个都行,看你自己怎么组合。
2. 你想通过MBA提高你leadership的什么方面。
发表于 2010-9-23 23:43:59 | 显示全部楼层
hey there ,happy to offer some thought here.

Describe your key leadership experiences and evaluate what leadership areas you hope to develop through your MBA experiences (600 word limit).

Here they’ve used that word “describe.” See? It is anything BUT arbitrary. This essay is about nothing other than “are you a leader, what kind of a leader are you, what kind of a leader do you hope to be.”

When you’re discussing leadership experiences, it is crucial to convey through action. Describe what you DID. What were the objectives? What were the challenges? How did you jump over each hurdle? Remember, relativity is key here. If you led a team of 7, someone else led one of 70. And, frankly, someone ELSE probably led one of 700. So dispense with the notion that hard numbers will impress. It’s all about setting up the specific circumstances that MADE those numbers impressive. A team of three can be incredibly impressive if it should have been 5 but two key members left prematurely.

Sometimes it’s hard to figure out what to write here that’s gonna sound impressive. The BEST way out of that is to simply (1) establish the objective and then (2) PILE ON the obstacles that were in your way. Whatever they were: time, difficult personalities, limited resources, etc etc. Then slowly, calmly… pick ‘em off one by one, like Eastwood in Unforgiven.

Good luck!

Jon Frank
 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-24 01:05:32 | 显示全部楼层
Thank you, Frank.

Like Eastwood in Unforgiven. It is cool.
发表于 2010-9-24 09:28:03 | 显示全部楼层
d等等
发表于 2010-9-24 09:29:04 | 显示全部楼层
此外,600字的essay足够塞下三个精致而又强大的leadership story。
如果你合适的组织语句,你会发现除非一些很复杂的情况,一些表现你leadership的场面不需要太多的词语。150一个就够了。
发表于 2010-9-24 13:11:19 | 显示全部楼层
leadership story需要三部分:
背景:问题在哪里?
解决:自己怎么想,怎么做的?(主要部分)
结果

可能是我水平不够吧,故事都太简单?
自己申请有些学校500字的essay,提炼出leadership skills后,200字就可以表现出原意的80%了。
 楼主| 发表于 2010-9-24 15:24:51 | 显示全部楼层
强大,多谢各位。
我还得精简精简。。。
发表于 2010-10-2 17:59:57 | 显示全部楼层
学些学习
发表于 2010-10-5 12:36:10 | 显示全部楼层
我就准备两个了,三个有点多了。
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