以下是引用arundhati在2004-5-8 12:36:00的发言：我来帮狗狗顶帖子喽～ 呵呵。 什么时候可以让我拜读下狗狗的SC总结啊？一定挺精彩吧？
我的总结噢....目前还是写书阶段啦.....cc....不过参考一题大家看看说, 不保证对错....cc
XDF-S16-22
Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles’ fuel efficiency,
since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles’ fuel efficiency,
since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car’s fuel by increasing car-road friction,
car owners can substantially boost their vehicles’ fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.
(C) Their vehicles’ fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that,
when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.
(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of
a car’s fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.（B）
(E) Because up to five percent of a car’s fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires
are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
Answer Key: (B)
我的解法是:
(C)(D)用被动语态, 表达笨拙
(C)(D) by the/ an increase表达笨拙
(A)(D) underinflation表示状态, 且未能明确指出是啥的underinflation
(D)(E) their指代不清, 应指代car, 句子前面并未有car
(C) 错误表达proper inflation can waste up..... , 语意错误 ; 且when状语从句省略不当
(E) Because......when.....are underinflated, 整句表达awkward | 
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