GWD1-Q34 求教！

lzczjgsu

GWD1-Q34老题新问
GWD1-Q34:

Although people in France
consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

1. people in
   France

consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their

people in
France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the

fatty foods are consumed by people in
France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their

the rate of fatty foods consumed in
France and the United States is about the same, the

the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in
France and the United States, the
请问B错在哪里？？

昵昵大人

Although (people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their) death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their
D the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

个人见解：
D和E在although引导的分居中，如果用the rate做主语，后面的分句比较的对象就不明确了（france到底跟哪个国家比？），因为这两个分句都是相对比较独立的了，虽然主语都是rate，但是rate的内容不一样，也不能想当然的把前一个分句rate的两个比较项当成是后一个分句的
而B，although分句中people做主语，后一个分句可以理解为the death rates （of people in France and the United States），gamt中貌似有这样的省略规律，这样的话整个句意更加清晰、明白

其实我一开始选的E。。。。。

wangsiwei

their指代不清楚，foods or people in France?

overmatch

贴个答案呗？这道题目是选E?
还不知道对不对，先谈谈自己的思路。OG里面一直强调说平行结构要工整，即使不是平行结构，工整的表达不容易引起歧义。所以应该是rate和rate之间的比较。CD说的是fatty food的rate，改变了原意，AB中although所带的从句的主语是人，不是rate，不够工整。所以选E.
如果不对的话还请各位指正啊~

lzczjgsu

谢啦，分析的有道理。

lzczjgsu

有一个疑惑，如果their前面有两个复数名词，但从逻辑上将只能修饰其中一个，那么这是算不算指代不清呢？

alpaca

...这道题到底选什么呀？为啥我看到的答案是B，有人说是D，现在又冒出E来了呢？完全混乱了....

lxxmickey

...这道题到底选什么呀？为啥我看到的答案是B，有人说是D，现在又冒出E来了呢？完全混乱了....

-- by 会员 alpaca (2010/8/22 10:12:44)

我看到答案也是B，同问！为什么E不对。。。请NN出来解答！

anqi_ren

我选的D，我的版本答案选的B，现在又出来E 我郁结了~

dephie222

感觉D和E比较的不平行，应该是the rate in France and in the U.S.请教大牛出来解答

wangxiwei

这道题选B阿 E我认为错在the rate of people consuming fatty foods
consuming fatty foods 作为现在分词修饰people 这个短语的意思是 在不停消耗食物的人的率
显然错误
同理D也是这个错误
DISCUSS