720+3 不想活了

彼岸小猫

刚刚查到作文才得了3分，不想活了，我想来想去都想不明白怎么才得这么点分，感觉写的还是挺镇定的，也回过去复查了语法错误了，难道是模板痕迹太明显？我该不该申请复议，那个有用吗？请各位指点

彼岸小猫

没人理我啊，我自己顶一下，好郁闷啊。。。怎么想都觉得我至少结构完整，不太可能得这么低啊

bofeng

能考到720的也算英语不错啦，怎么才3分啊。。申请复议吧，支持你！

彼岸小猫

总算有个人理我了 被这个极品分数弄得我郁闷死了  我还是申请复议吧  虽然说结果可能低一些可能高一些，不过我这分再低还能怎么低啊

呜啦呜啦dd

pat pat~

【睡橙】

姐姐也曾经3.5过。

彼岸小猫

我又回去死劲地把作文翻出来 看了一下网络课堂里四分作文的内容 确定我再怎么差也不会比这个差啊  我不服气。。。就是因为作文觉得发挥得不错 后面的语文数学我才做得比较镇定的   我不服气  不服气 不服气 。。。

fly12404

可能是模板太像了
建議貼出來給大家瞧瞧
避免重蹈覆轍了

彼岸小猫

AA模板我用得很少，大部分都自己写的，AI大概就是这个模板：

The issue at hand , …,  is very controversial. To some extents, I agree with the speaker’s assertion that……….. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme, while overlooks other possible factors that may affect the issue. My point of agreement and contention with the author involves the basic and deep discussion as follow.

In the first place, the most important reason supporting the author’s opinion is that……..
For example……….. Furthermore…………  Therefore, it is sagacious to admit that this assertion, although suffers from some obvious drawbacks, has some merits primarily because the implicit rationale behind the author’s assertion accords with common sense and our everyday experience. Hence, it is partially indisputable.

In the second place, recognizing that a more appropriate choice must incorporate different aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I have to point out that, this assertion amounts to an overstatement while fails to take into account other essential factors that may affect the issue. The most compelling argument I find is that.   Besides.


To sum up, the issue that ………is a complex one. By taking account all the factors discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that…

miller811

靠T的作文吧