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cutewen

Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species of the world’s social wasps, wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.
A.    wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of
B.    wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of
C.    which means they live in a highly cooperative and organized society, almost all
D.    which means that their society is highly cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
E.    living in a society that is highly cooperative, organized, and it consists of almost all


这个题选B  不懂啊! 谁看明白了解释一下 T.T

cutewen

忙啊。 LZ 很充实啊

-- by 会员 abjure (2010/6/3 22:27:03)

哎呀 考前能不忙么~~不忙那就挂了 哈哈。

cutewen

45分钟..470words  比第一次写AA好 第一次俩小时 - -

洗澡！睡觉！明早起来过一遍逻辑狗！

manna

Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species of the world’s social wasps, wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.
A.    wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of
B.    wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of
C.    which means they live in a highly cooperative and organized society, almost all
D.    which means that their society is highly cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
E.    living in a society that is highly cooperative, organized, and it consists of almost all

manna

Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species of the world’s social wasps, wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where
they consist almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.

A.    wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of
      A中，they指代有问题。这句话的主语是Yellow jackets number，是单数，而they是复数形式。

B.   wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of
     B正确。that引导wasps的宾语从句

C.   which means they live in a highly cooperative and organized society, almost all
    C中，which修饰模糊，句子逻辑不对；they指代不清，是yellow jackets还是social wasps?;另外，almost all是作为society的同位语，句子缺少谓语。

D.    which means that their society is highly cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
     D中，which错误同C；their错误同C中they的错误；it指代模糊，是Yellow jackets number还是society?

E.    living in a society that is highly cooperative, organized, and it consists of almost all
      E中，用that引导society的宾语从句不如直接把highly cooperative, organized作定语修饰society这样的结构来得简洁；it错误同D

Cutewen，这道题我用排除法，是因为我对于B中consisting 的用法有疑惑，亦或者是我对于句子结构的理解有误。恳请指教，一起探讨！

-- by 会员 manna (2010/6/4 1:11:29)

cutewen

今天在学校一直没连上网..

白天只过了一遍CR狗+一套GWD的SC
晚上分析两套GWD的SC
一篇AA
数学狗帮忙整理。

就这些啦。

manna~~我才回家还米看你给我的答复哈。等会吃饭了来~~~

cutewen

看完了你的解释呢。哎。我只能明白你的解释 却无法回答你的问题 T.T
今天又看到坛子里有悲剧发生了...真担心诶。

加油吧。我得努力努力。

nowwsy

consisting 是用来修饰前面的society

manna

consisting 是用来修饰前面的society

-- by 会员 nowwsy (2010/6/4 21:17:54)

句子谓语呢？

nowwsy

consisting 是用来修饰前面的society

-- by 会员 nowwsy (2010/6/4 21:17:54)

句子谓语呢？

-- by 会员 manna (2010/6/4 21:21:36)

我觉得是前面的number .
后面的waps是其那面的同位语